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Sun Jun 11, 2017 11:36 pm
ExOmelas says...



Hey everyone,

Every month I do 20 Green Room reviews for Lady Lizz's Order of the Ravens. I've just finished that this month and would like to step out of there for a wee bit.

So if you've got any poetry that's lying around gathering dust, a short story with 2 reviews that's nowhere near as polished as it could be, or a long-running novel you'd like to me to start at the beginning of, here is the place!

p.s. If there is something specific in the GR you would like reviewed, I'll still happily do so :)

What fools these mortals be!
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Who cares if one more light goes out?
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Mon Jun 12, 2017 12:54 am
Dest says...



Hi @BiscuitsLeGuin, could you review my story Dreaded Dinner Party (Prologue)? So far I have 14 chapters of it posted, but I wouldn't mind if you reviewed as much or as little as you like. Any feedback on the characters, plot, and grammar would be appreciated.
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 8:58 am
ExOmelas says...



Will do! Pretty sure I noticed a chapter of that in the GR so I'll try and get up to that by the end of the month :)

What fools these mortals be!
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Who cares if one more light goes out?
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Tue Jun 13, 2017 9:53 am
writerkitty says...



Meow! ^-^
Hi there @BiscuitsLeGuin, could you please review, Engulfed- Chapter Three
It's been in the Green Room for a while now... :D

^-^ Thank you!!
(Also, I greatly appreciate it if you could review the other chapters as well)

Just keep writing, writing, WRITING! :D
  





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Tue Jun 13, 2017 11:20 am
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Will definitely read the other two first yeah :)

What fools these mortals be!
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Who cares if one more light goes out?
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Thu Jun 15, 2017 9:27 pm
UFO says...



You asked me to post these here
Prologue
Compendium: Prologue

Chapter 1
Compendium: Chapter 1
  





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Thu Jun 15, 2017 9:55 pm
ExOmelas says...



Cheers, yeah. Will do these in between my reviews of Dreaded Dinner Party :)

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream


Who cares if one more light goes out?
Well I do.

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Fri Jun 16, 2017 6:18 am
davidgma says...



Hey I'm working on a shorty story for a gift and I need some proofreading and reviews asap. It's untitled and call short story in green room. I'm fairly inexperienced in this sight and would love some help lol
  





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Fri Jun 16, 2017 9:26 am
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Cool, will get to it

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream


Who cares if one more light goes out?
Well I do.

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Mon Jul 03, 2017 4:04 pm
RubyRed says...



Hey, Biscuits, could you review the prologue to my novel please? I need a few more opinions on it.

Hope, Fill Dark Places - Prologue

Thanks! <333
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— Truman Capote

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Mon Jul 03, 2017 4:34 pm
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Sure thing @RubyRed. I'll probably get to it tomorrow morning for my Team Tortoise review of the day :)

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream


Who cares if one more light goes out?
Well I do.

Linkin Park
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Mon Nov 20, 2017 1:22 pm
ChocoDanish says...



i need help with my tenses n my pace. pick whichever u like

Beginning (part1)
Family and Friends (part2)
Fluffs (part3)
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Mon Nov 20, 2017 4:34 pm
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hey, i'll try and get to these :) I have a lot of essays by now so it might be next month but i'll do my best

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream


Who cares if one more light goes out?
Well I do.

Linkin Park
One More Light


  





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Wed Dec 20, 2017 4:05 pm
Atticus says...



Hey there Biscuits! If/when you have time, I would really appreciate some reviews on chapters 1.2 and 1.3 of my Blue Powder novel. They are both still in the green room, and you are welcome to check out 1.1 if you want to get caught up! There's no rush, but they've been sitting in the GR for quite a while, and once they get out, I have other chapters to post. Again, thanks so much, and happy holidays!
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fatherfig says...



If when you have time The Way We Hide Could use a review.
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