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Fri Aug 18, 2017 11:12 pm
Virgil says...



@Stormcloud Sure hon! I'll get on that right now.

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Sat Aug 19, 2017 2:45 am
Virgil says...



@Stormcloud Review requested is finished! Enjoy.

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Sun Aug 20, 2017 2:14 am
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Lightsong says...



Please review kuala lumpur! Thanks! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Mon Aug 21, 2017 11:30 am
Virgil says...



@Lightsong Sure! May be a day or two until I get to that, but of course.

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Wed Aug 23, 2017 10:17 pm
everonlyaudaciously says...



Hi Nikayla!

Thought, maybe, after all the talk, I'd finally post something for review. Maybe you can help me there?

Alice in the Stars.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=137108
  





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Thu Aug 24, 2017 9:21 am
Virgil says...



Sure, @everonlyaudaciously! I may not be there right away (I'll probably take a day or two to do the review) but I'll definitely review that. c:

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Sun Aug 27, 2017 12:30 am
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Virgil says...



@everonlyaudaciously Apologies that the review took longer than expected! It's done now. Enjoy!

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Wed Aug 30, 2017 12:54 am
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Hijinks says...



Hello, hello, hello!
Would you be so kind as to review phenomena ?
I wrote it originally a while ago and then ... completely rewrote it ...
It might be a bit rough - not polished, that is - but I know you're good at reviewing poetry so I thought I'd mention it.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

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Fri Sep 01, 2017 9:26 am
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@whatchamacallit I'm sorry I took two days to reply! I didn't get a notification, gah. Of course I'll review that poem of yours--I'll definitely get to that today.

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Sun Sep 03, 2017 1:46 am
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@whatchamacallit Review is finally finished! Enjoy.

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Sun Sep 03, 2017 5:07 pm
Hijinks says...



Thanks!
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Sun Sep 10, 2017 6:40 am
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ardentlyThieving says...



Hey hey Kays! I'd really really appreciate it if you review my latest writing!!

A truth, a lie, and a half-truth

Thanks!!
“Thus human beings judge of one another, superficially, casually, throwing contempt on one another, with but little reason, and no charity.” - Emmuska Orczy, 'The Scarlet Pimpernel'
  





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Sun Sep 10, 2017 3:44 pm
Virgil says...



@ardentlyThieving No problem, love! I'll try to get on that by the end of the day.

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Mon Sep 11, 2017 11:11 pm
Virgil says...



@ardentlyThieving Apologies for the wait! Took a day longer than expected, haha, but the review is done! Enjoy.

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Wed Oct 18, 2017 5:59 pm
LizzieH3 says...



Can you review my poem The Worry Child ? I'm looking for ways to improve the poem but also improve my general writing skills. Thanks
  








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