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Wed Aug 16, 2017 9:08 pm
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@Kays
I'll finish up the exodus request tonight.

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Mon Aug 28, 2017 6:46 pm
Lightsong says...



Hey, please review my on-going novel, Dancer of the Fire Blade. Thanks! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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@Lightsong
I'll start working on it tonight.

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Sun Sep 10, 2017 6:35 am
ardentlyThieving says...



I'd love some more reviews on my newest work as I'm kinda proud of it. Wanna see what I'm doing right, and what I can continue to improve on :D Thanks!

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Sun Sep 10, 2017 7:02 pm
Brigadier says...



@ardentlyThieving

I'll try to get to it some time tonight after I finish out Light's novel request.

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Mon Dec 04, 2017 10:28 pm
zaminami says...



You can review anything in my portfolio.
tartaglia, they/he lesbian.
i also go by skylar and reginald!
First member of the bio trio™.
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Wed Jan 17, 2018 11:27 pm
Brigadier says...



@demongoddess anything in particular that you want an extra comment on?

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Thu Jan 18, 2018 12:10 am
zaminami says...



Nah, I gave you the portfolio so you can make your pick :)
tartaglia, they/he lesbian.
i also go by skylar and reginald!
First member of the bio trio™.
victim of the writer’s block disease
  





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Sat Jan 20, 2018 8:28 pm
camusic says...



Hey, could you review Seltas's first kill I promise it's not gorry! I personly hate reading that kind of stuff... and I'd rather a critic over a wow that's so great kinda thing if that makes any sense.
Thanks in advance.
  





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Sun Aug 19, 2018 7:25 pm
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I'm re-opening to follow lms novels...

As long as you're okay with a few things.
1. I am not going to get to your novel 30 minutes after you post it. It might take me up to a week or it might take me longer.
2. I can review a novel all the way through but if I get to a point where it's not worth it to me, I will stop.
3. It's a review. It's a critique. It will have criticism.

That is all.

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Sat Sep 15, 2018 3:11 pm
serpyre says...



Could you possibly review my story here? Belli Gloria

(I'm new, so please lmk or clarify about the payment - I'm pretty certain a meme isn't enough lol)

Thank you~
  





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Sat Dec 22, 2018 5:57 am
Aranya says...



Hi LadyBird

Could you pls review my slam poem on gay love?

Honey and Sunshine

Pls help me it's for a competition.

Thank you so much
  





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Thu Jan 17, 2019 5:58 pm
Brigadier says...



@camusic - request filled
@serpyre - request filled
@Aranya - request filled

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