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Sun Apr 16, 2017 5:45 am
deleted868 says...



Hey there!

I'll review pretty much anything, as long as it's not 18+, since I'm not 18 yet XD.

Anything else is up for grabs, and maybe if it sounds really interesting, I'll review a "mature" story, as long as you're fine with a non-adult reviewing it.

I'll get to the reviews as quickly as possible!

Oh, and if your work has a lot of reviews already on it, unless there's a certain aspect you're really wanting more advice on, I don't think another review would really add that much, so I most likely will not review those works, sorry.

I hope I can help you out!
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Mon Apr 17, 2017 7:17 pm
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zaminami says...



Hello! Can you review my poem: Romance? This'll be really helpful!
tartaglia, they/he lesbian.
i also go by skylar and reginald!
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Tue Apr 18, 2017 5:20 am
deleted868 says...



@KaraStevens Done! I hope it helped!
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Tue Apr 18, 2017 7:34 am
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Asith says...



Well, since you're up for it, I'd appreciate it if you can check out my extract of my fantasy story about a race of winged humans :)

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Wed Apr 19, 2017 5:28 am
deleted868 says...



@Asith Done! I hope that helped!
Hey! I hope your day's been swell, and if not, there's always time for it to get better. See ya!
  





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Sat May 06, 2017 10:45 pm
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Saruka says...



Heyo! Review my poem, Malala please?
a lesbian disaster
  





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Sun May 07, 2017 5:24 am
deleted868 says...



@SarukaTheHuman Done! I hope it helped!
Hey! I hope your day's been swell, and if not, there's always time for it to get better. See ya!
  








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