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Thu May 04, 2017 7:15 pm
PrincessInk says...



@regismare: Done! :)
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Mon Jan 08, 2018 12:56 am
PrincessInk says...



Re-opening, with newly updated content on 1st post.
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Tue Jan 09, 2018 12:39 am
Saruka says...



Link to work: writers' block
Author’s Note: this left the green room because of really unhelpful reviews, make sure to leave some constructive criticism
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Thu Jan 11, 2018 2:20 am
PrincessInk says...



@Saruka: wrote the review! :)
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Fri Jan 12, 2018 3:48 am
charleslee says...



Hey, I was wondering if you could take a look at the first few chapters of my novel here, or as many as you can. They aren't too long. If you can only do one, I'd prefer you started at the beginning. Thanks so much!

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/charleslee/I-Will-Return-Prologue-138905

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/charleslee/I-Will-Return-Chapter-1-138924

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/charleslee/I-Will-Return-Chapter-21-138987
  





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Thu Jan 18, 2018 4:12 am
Elinor says...



Link to work: Yesterday
Description: A five year romance told in memories.
Author’s Note: It should be obvious when you read, but it's non-linear.
Other: It's a film script with no dialogue. I'm hoping to shoot this over the summer which is why I want more feedback.

Thanks a million!

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Thu Jan 18, 2018 3:42 pm
PrincessInk says...



@Elinor: sorry, but I prefer not to review works that are 16+ or 18+! Let me know if there's something else you'd want me to read and review, and I'll be happy to do it.
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Thu Jan 18, 2018 6:20 pm
Elinor says...



Hey @PrincessInk you can review Till There Was You instead. It's a companion piece with the same two characters, so I would appreciate a focus on character development in the review, as that would be the most help to me. Let me know if you have questions and I can give you some more context if you would like!

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Sat Feb 10, 2018 7:15 pm
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@Elinor: I just wanted to review your piece, but it was somehow set to private?
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Sat Feb 10, 2018 9:35 pm
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@PrincessInk try now

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Sun Feb 11, 2018 1:44 am
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@Elinor: Sorry to bother you again, but I think it's still set to private? Wonder how it happened again.
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Sun Feb 11, 2018 2:19 am
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It shouldn't be

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Mon Feb 12, 2018 1:08 am
PrincessInk says...



@Elinor: I'm really really sorry to poke you again about this, but it's still set to private for me. Is there possibly a bug?
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Tue Feb 13, 2018 5:14 pm
WritingWolf says...



Link to work: Reaching Wide Audiences in Serialized Television Shows
Description: A compare/contrast essay between Avatar: The Last Airbender and Trollhunters: Tales of Arcadia.
Author’s Note: In particular I'd love you to double check my grammar and spelling. Also, and recommendations on how to condense it would be appreciated (I'm over length haha). Also, this essay is due this Sunday (2/18/18) so if there is any way at all that you could review it before then that would be amazing. If not I still appreciate feedback on my work so that I can grow as a writer.
Other: Thanks in advance. :)
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Wed Feb 14, 2018 6:31 pm
PrincessInk says...



Done! Who's next? ;)
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