Young Writers Society

So if you review any of my works- What Death Looks Like, My Legacy One: Swallowed Prologue, My 2 Sentence Horror Stories, and Ding Dong Part 1: Jamie- I will review one or more of your stories and then send you cookies through PM or your wall. Don't worry, I have endless cookies.

I will get to them sooner or later. Look down below to see what I'll review sooner rather than later. Please tell me both genres if there are two genres. If your story falls into the Depends column (Marked in blue), then tell me what it's about so I can judge from there.



Keep in mind that I'm not the best reviewer (especially with poetry), but I try to get grammar errors and I also give you tips to make your work more exciting!

Hey, KaraStevens! I'll make sure to review all of them if I can, I'll try doing them at the weekend though. I'm so stressed out right now to focus on reviewing with a real critic outlook.

(I'm just here for the cookies)

Just kidding

ScytheMeister wrote:Hey, KaraStevens! I'll make sure to review all of them if I can, I'll try doing them at the weekend though. I'm so stressed out right now to focus on reviewing with a real critic outlook.

(I'm just here for the cookies)

Just kidding

Haha, okay. Awesome. You really want cookies, huh. I don't blame you; cookies are amazing.

So I went ahead and threw you a review. I'm writing an fantasy/adventure novel and was wondering if I could get some reviews on that. I'll keep throwing you reviews.

The other thing I'm looking for reviews on is a fantasy/horror novel. That one is pretty dark, but judging by your writing I didn't think you'd mind. Here are the links to the first chapters of each:

Huntress: Chapter 1- Pack [Edited; LMS] <This is the action/adventure one.

Shadowsong: Chapter 1.1 <The horror one

Can we trade a review for a review? I need Chapter 8 reviewing, so do you have any preference as to which work of yours I review? My LMS is fantasy/adventure, but chapter eight does have a tad of romance in it, just to warn you (nothing explicit, but some people are sensitive to romance in general sooo)

regismare wrote:Can we trade a review for a review? I need Chapter 8 reviewing, so do you have any preference as to which work of yours I review? My LMS is fantasy/adventure, but chapter eight does have a tad of romance in it, just to warn you (nothing explicit, but some people are sensitive to romance in general sooo)

I don't have any problem with romance. Do you have a problem with horror (that's my specialty, I think)? I do have a fantasy thing, but it's only a prologue so I don't know if you'll have a problem with that. Thanks!--

Kara

Entry 1-- The Mental Hospital for the Traumatized: The Woman

Entry 2-- The Mental Hospital for the Traumatized: The Woman

NEW WORKS! PLEASE REVIEW!