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Thu Mar 16, 2017 12:45 am
Feltrix says...



I can't promise to respond quickly, but I'll do my best.

I don't feel qualified to review poetry, so please don't request it. I also won't review anything rated 18+.

I feel best qualified to review sic-fi, fantasy, and action/adventure books and short stories, but I will review anything that I didn't just say I wouldn't. That includes *shudders* romance. I don't enjoy romance, but if you really want me to, I'll review it.

I also won't read the previous chapters to a chapter that has been requested, just the requested chapter.

To sum it up, I won't review:
Poetry
18+ rating

I will review, but don't want to:
Essay
Romance *shudders*

I want to review:
Action/Adventure
Sci-Fi
Fantasy

I will review with no particular feelings:
Everything else

Let the reviews begin!
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Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:06 pm
skylnn00writes says...



Hey! So I have 3 stories on here but 2 of them are romance so I won't request those :P I am going to request my most recent story, it's the first chapter, not very long. It doesn't give much but it is sci-fi and futuristic. I hope you like it. Take your time and you don't have to review my work :smt001 Thank you!

Here is the link:
Chapter 1
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Fri Mar 17, 2017 2:16 pm
Feltrix says...



Done!
Intrepid Explorer
Squire of the Green Room
Harbinger of the Cosmic Squid
Brief Castaway
Founder of Hermits United
TIME Magazine's 2006 Person of the Year
Dark Matter Overlord
Kind of a Big Deal
  





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Sat Apr 15, 2017 11:22 pm
occymay says...



I'm going to take you up on this for Knowing Gods. It's a fantasy which has multiple worlds. It's the first two chapters, I hope that's okay, they're not big. I'm linking these because there are too many drafts.

Knowing Gods chapter 1 (Third draft) This one is going through editing but what I have doesn't currently make sense so I'm just going to say what they are. This chapter has become chapter 3, chapter 1 now being about the antagonist, the flashback has been removed as well as the small fight scene.

Knowing Gods Chapter 2 (Third draft) This one is under really heavy editing but I kind of just want a second opinion on the most recent draft.

Thank you ^_^
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Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:30 am
Featherstone says...



Could I get some reviews on my fantasy novel, Huntress? It has a bit of language and violence, but nothing super intense or gory.

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That's the link to the first out of three chapters.
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Tue Apr 18, 2017 12:21 am
Feltrix says...



@featherstone9086, could you send the link again? I clicked on it and YWS said "I'm afarid I can't let you do that, Dave."
Intrepid Explorer
Squire of the Green Room
Harbinger of the Cosmic Squid
Brief Castaway
Founder of Hermits United
TIME Magazine's 2006 Person of the Year
Dark Matter Overlord
Kind of a Big Deal
  





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Tue Apr 18, 2017 12:23 am
Featherstone says...



Huntress: Chapter 1- Pack [Edited; LMS]

Here it is! Sorry about that. Also, btw, I don't need reviews on Chapter 1/2 that don't say [Edited] on the end of them ^_^ Thanks!
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Wed Apr 19, 2017 5:47 pm
Feltrix says...



@featherstone9086 Sorry this is taking so long. I'm on vacation, so I haven't been reviewing much.
Intrepid Explorer
Squire of the Green Room
Harbinger of the Cosmic Squid
Brief Castaway
Founder of Hermits United
TIME Magazine's 2006 Person of the Year
Dark Matter Overlord
Kind of a Big Deal
  





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Wed Apr 19, 2017 5:49 pm
Featherstone says...



No problem. I'm patient :)
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Thu Apr 20, 2017 3:00 pm
Aaraju says...



Hi. I need an honest review for my article. Here's the link

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Aaraju/An-Unfulfilled-Dream-135138

Thank you very much.
  








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