Young Writers Society

I'll take requests to review.

Things to know before you ask:

-I WILL NOT review fanfiction. Please do not ask.

- I try to review generally, and not focus on specific things. If you want me to focus on a certain aspect of the story, please ask.

-Ask for only one thing at a time!

-Feel free to tell me things I might need to know if I'm reviewing a late novel chapter, it'll help clear things up when I review.

-I'll try to get to it within the week, but sometimes I get busy so please don't rush me. If you think that I've forgotten about your review, just pm me and ask. I won't bite, but I can't promise to be nice to those who are rude.

-I will accept requests to review a whole novel, but I'd always prefer for it to be in the earlier stages than having 30 chapters already published.


All you have to do is send me a link and any information I might need (examples stated above).

Could you review all/any of the Myriad series?

Ascension: Phyrza Prologue (The Myriad book 1)
Ascension: Corso 1 (The Myriad book 1)
Ascension: Thørn 2 (The Myriad book 1)
Ascension: Nyx 3 (The Myriad book 1)
Ascension: Alsari 4 (The Myriad book 1)
Ascension: Corso 5 (The Myriad book 1)
Ascension: Thørn 6 (The Myriad book 1)
Ascension: Nyx 7 (The Myriad book 1)

Feel no pressure to review all of them.
Thanks!

Hey, I was wondering if you would review the first 5 chapters to my story? It's all in one, but it is pretty long so if you even do one that'll be good enough for me

Here is the link:
(Undecided) #1: Ch. 1-5

Thank you so much!

I'm just going to send you my entire portfolio so you can choose what to review

The Evil Portfolio

Hey, I'm not sure if you do scripts but if you do I'll love it if you can take a look at Grow Out - First Scene for me

Thanks

Hey, saw your wall post about LMS stuff. I wanted to let you know that I'm starting a new fantasy novel and setting out with the intention to focus on setting description and varied sentence structure from the beginning... so that I can find the other big holes in my writing that they were overshadowing I don't have a thread or anything yet but just thought you might be interested in my attempts to use your advice ^.^

The Risen - chapter one

can you review my whole novel? It will also be my LMS novel (I'm entering as a rogue) and since you asked for that I thought I'd ask I only have four chapters up so far!

@elysian I'll definitely review your novel! If you're on discord, that'd help me a lot, but it's okay if you're not. I'll try to get to the first four chapters this week (i might just do one big overview of the four on the fourth one before reviewing regularly unless you have issues with that). If I don't get to it within the week, you are well within your rights to remind me (but I will be busy next week).

I am on discord!

my handle is Stormcloud#0252

Hi! I’d be very thankful if you could review my work : and the snow is falling up into the sky.

Thank you!

Could you please link it? I'm going to be on and off sporadically, but I'll try to get to it within a week.