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Tue Jan 31, 2017 2:25 am
ScarlettFire says...



Hello guys! Request those reviews below!

I find Poetry easiest to review, but I will also review novel/chapters and short stories. I'm also open to pretty much any genre except Articles/Essays, Romance, Religion or Politics.


(To Do List) Things I'm Currently Reviewing:
1. Firebond - Chapter 1 by @SharkTheCat
2. Downhill by @SarukaTheHuman
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And....this thread is now open!

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yes, I finally did this. shhhh
Last edited by ScarlettFire on Mon Apr 17, 2017 3:12 am, edited 9 times in total.
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Sun Feb 05, 2017 2:52 pm
Dest says...



Hi ScarlettFire, could you review this? Dreaded Dinner Party (Edited)

It's supposed to be a light-humor kids' story.
  





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Sun Feb 05, 2017 3:04 pm
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I'll take a look, @Dest! It might take me a little bit, though.
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Mon Feb 13, 2017 12:31 pm
ScarlettFire says...



Reviewed, @Dest!
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Sun Feb 19, 2017 1:48 am
Squirtlepowiee says...



Hey! Can you review my work, 49?

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49


Thanks!!!!
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Mon Feb 20, 2017 11:30 am
ScarlettFire says...



Hey, @Squirtlepowiee. I see you've asked me to review something. Upon taking a look, I don't think I even know how to review that. I'm afraid I can't review it. But if you have anything else you want me to look at, feel free to ask!
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Mon Feb 20, 2017 6:44 pm
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It's kay, thank you, though!
When I was in English, my teacher look in my direction and said, "Name two pronouns." I replied, "Who, me?" :wink:
  





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Tue Feb 28, 2017 11:42 pm
Queenie says...



Hi! I just wrote a poem called Cruel Crown. If you could review it that'd be great, if not that's okay too. Thanks.
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Thu Mar 02, 2017 12:53 am
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Hey @Queenie! I'll take a look. Is there any chance you can link me to that?
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Thu Mar 02, 2017 1:16 am
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Thanks, although I'm new here, so I'm not sure how to link stuff.
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Thu Mar 02, 2017 1:21 am
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Usually you copy the url, but don't worry about it this time. I found it!
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Thu Mar 30, 2017 2:11 am
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Hello!

Would you kindly review this fella here: Firebond: Chapter 1?

Thank you in advance! :D
  





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Fri Mar 31, 2017 10:48 am
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Hi there, @SharkTheCat! Sorry for the late reply. I can certainly take a look at this for you! It might just take me a while to get around to it. ^^
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Fri Mar 31, 2017 5:42 pm
Silberfee says...



please review even if to say that its bad bc then I can have peace :) Twice the foreigner
  





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Tue Apr 11, 2017 12:04 am
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Done, @Queenie!
"With friends like you, who needs a medical license?" - Paimon, Aether's Heart


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