Young Writers Society

Hello,

Please request a review by posting a link to the piece (must be from YWS). I do not want to critique poetry or fan-fiction - I'd prefer an original piece of fiction. If your submission is extremely long then please indicate a sensible portion for me to focus on. If your piece is midway a story, please provide a brief description of what has happened thus far.

Feel free to explain the level of feedback you would like from me, otherwise I will provide varied constructive criticism, including (but not limited to) story development, sentence structure and word use. I will also offer praise when due

I look forward to receiving requests.

Thanks,

Zoom

I'd like for you to review the first chapter of a novel that I'm working on. This is a rough draft, though it is edited for spelling and grammar mistakes. I'd really like to know readers' thoughts on the first chapter. Is it compelling? Do you want to know more? It is roughly 3000 words. Any critique is welcome!

Scolopendra

Done. Thanks for sharing that with me, it was fantastic. I provided as much constructive criticism as possible however I slipped out of review mode about halfway through because I was really enjoying the story. I'm looking forward to subsequent posts from you.

Next, anyone?

Follow The Shining Stars

This please. Would love if you could focus on my paragraphing.

@Dracula Finished, thanks for sharing! It was very cute.

Could you review mine, please? I would appreciate it a lot. Dreaded Dinner Party

@Dest Done, thanks for sharing. It was very humorous!