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Mon Jan 02, 2017 9:50 pm
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"If I had nine hours to chop down a tree, I'd spend the first six sharpening my ax." -Abraham Lincoln

Hello, fellow YWSers!

As my mission here is to boost the development of your writing skills over the course of the next year, I am eagerly accepting requests for reviews. There are only two things you need to do:

• Post a link to your literary work in this thread.

• Tell me what you would like to me too take a look at (e.g. character development, grammar mistakes, plot progression, structure, style, etcetra).

Lastly, I can not promise to meet your requests immediately. However, I will try my best to be as prompt as possible.

Thank you! :)
  





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Sun Jan 08, 2017 2:46 am
Dracula says...



Follow The Shining Stars I would it if you could check my paragraphing, please.
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Thu Apr 20, 2017 9:10 am
LilyRose says...



Hi I would really like reviews for my realistic short story The Other Side I am writing it for a short story competition of which the deadline is tomorrow so if it can be done asap that would be really helpful thanks xx
  





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Mon Apr 24, 2017 6:08 am
sabyemerald says...



Hello! Please review my work. I guess I need you to comment on my writing style and give me tips on how to make my work better. I would really appreciate your help. Thank you. :)

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