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Wed Dec 14, 2016 10:13 am
shima says...



Well hello there ! How do you do ? Come on in, don't be afraid. :-) Oh, you want me to review something for you ? Of course ! Just give me the title and I will be right on it !
Last edited by shima on Tue Dec 05, 2017 8:22 pm, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Wed Dec 21, 2016 2:10 am
Dracula says...



Follow The Stars (Edited)

This please! Thanks.
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Fri Jan 20, 2017 12:35 pm
shima says...



Done.

BTW - this is still open. If anybody needs a review.
  





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Fri Jan 20, 2017 11:25 pm
davidgma says...



Please read an unwilling leader

(i dont know how to link it but its the only thing I have written on here)
  





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Sat Jan 21, 2017 12:21 am
MeatBunCat says...



Oh, this is still active?

Glorious Fantasy Ch.1: A New world

Beyond the review on what you think of the chapter, if you can tell me how much you can stand to read of the story as a whole, like if you would want to read more, that would be nice. :D
  





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Sun Jan 22, 2017 4:17 pm
shima says...



Well, both reviews completed. Ready player one, waiting for more reading.
  





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Thu Feb 02, 2017 11:08 pm
shima says...



Did this one and two others. Will do the third tomorrow if I have time.

Waiting for more review food, folks.
  





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Wed Feb 22, 2017 10:14 pm
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Up, up and above. Hopefully there are no rules against raising your own (dead) topics.
  





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Thu Feb 23, 2017 7:44 pm
GoldenQuill says...



Hey Shima! Would you mind reviewing something of Still Stone? I'm sending you all I have so far -- feel free to read whatever part you'd like. (I didn't split up chapter one into multiple parts, so it comes off a little long -- my deepest apologies.)
Still Stone - one.
Still Stone - two. (part one.)
Still Stone - two. (part two.)
formerly ZlyWilk

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Fri Feb 24, 2017 1:47 pm
Feltrix says...



Hello! I need reviews for anything from the Myriad series except the original version. I don't know how to make a link (which would be useful information should anyone choose to volunteer it), but here's what I've written so far.

The Myriad: Ascension Prologue
The Myriad: Ascension Corso 1
The Myriad: Ascension Thørn 2
The Myriad: Ascension Nyx 3
Intrepid Explorer
Squire of the Green Room
Harbinger of the Cosmic Squid
Brief Castaway
Founder of Hermits United
TIME Magazine's 2006 Person of the Year
Dark Matter Overlord
Kind of a Big Deal
  





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Tue Feb 28, 2017 3:28 am
skylnn00writes says...



Hey! I do not currently have a name for my work but it is titled (Undecided)

Here is the link just in case:
(Undecided)

Thank you so much!
~Sky <3
  





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Mon Apr 03, 2017 9:40 pm
Dracula says...



Untitled (Zombie Apocalypse Romance Short) please?
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Thu Apr 20, 2017 7:20 am
LilyRose says...



Hi I would really like reviews for my realistic short story The Other Side I am writing it for a short story competition of which the deadline is tomorrow so if it can be done asap that would be really helpful thanks xx
  





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Mon Oct 16, 2017 11:31 am
shima says...



Yeah, Shima here. If anybody is still in need of a review - step right this way.
  








It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
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