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Wed Nov 30, 2016 5:58 am
Featherstone says...



Hello everyone!

I am open to reviewing pretty much anything: essays, poems, chapters, fiction, mysteries, horrors, fantasies, or whatever else. I can't say I'm very good at poetry, though, so I do suggest going to someone else for that.

I write/read fantasy and science fiction, so that is, naturally, what I am best at, in addition to any essays or non-fiction. I prioritize Green Room works, and if the piece is long it may be bumped a bit because I need more time for it.

See you all on the mighty battlefield of the Green Room and the Fields of All Literary,

-Featherstone of the Knights of the Green Room
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Wed Nov 30, 2016 4:43 pm
WritingWolf says...



Could you please review my essay for me? It is due soon and I need feedback quickly.
Why I Want to Go to Japan

Thank you so much!
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Sun Dec 04, 2016 10:55 am
Lord Anziu says...



Hey,
I'm just a lonesome writer looking for a reviewer for my work. It's a project I started 3 years ago, but it went on hiatus after I started university. I read it through and edited it a bit, but now I think I need some new insight.
Thanks in advance
Gods and Kings: Fury of the Desert -Chapter 1- ongoing-
Formerly known as Lord Anzius, now returned as Lord Anziu... But just call me Anzius like everyone else.
  





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Mon Dec 05, 2016 2:18 pm
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Done! Enjoy!
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The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Tue Dec 06, 2016 7:39 am
dracowave says...



Hi I have a story named Return to Oblivion Draft that i would like for you to review/critique. It includes the prologue and the first chapter. Thanks in advance
  





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Sat Dec 31, 2016 2:48 am
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Featherstone says...



Hey @CarryOnMrCaulfield,

This is closed. Unfortunately I couldn't figure out how to post that on the tag, so here I am now explaining. After this I'll just make a post that says 'closed.' Shoulda done that earlier. Sorry. At any rate, when I eventually open this up again I will be happy to look through those.

Good luck writing!

Apologies,

Feather
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Sat Dec 31, 2016 2:49 am
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CLOSED
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
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