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Wed Nov 30, 2016 5:58 am
Featherstone says...



Hello everyone!

I am open to reviewing pretty much anything: essays, poems, chapters, fiction, mysteries, horrors, fantasies, or whatever else. I can't say I'm very good at poetry, though, so I do suggest going to someone else for that.

I write/read fantasy and science fiction, so that is, naturally, what I am best at, in addition to any essays or non-fiction. I prioritize Green Room works, and if the piece is long it may be bumped a bit because I need more time for it.

See you all on the mighty battlefield of the Green Room and the Fields of All Literary,

-Featherstone of the Knights of the Green Room
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The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Wed Nov 30, 2016 4:43 pm
WritingWolf says...



Could you please review my essay for me? It is due soon and I need feedback quickly.
Why I Want to Go to Japan

Thank you so much!
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Sun Dec 04, 2016 10:55 am
Lord Anziu says...



Hey,
I'm just a lonesome writer looking for a reviewer for my work. It's a project I started 3 years ago, but it went on hiatus after I started university. I read it through and edited it a bit, but now I think I need some new insight.
Thanks in advance
Gods and Kings: Fury of the Desert -Chapter 1- ongoing-
Formerly known as Lord Anzius, now returned as Lord Anziu... But just call me Anzius like everyone else.
  





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Mon Dec 05, 2016 2:18 pm
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Done! Enjoy!
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The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Tue Dec 06, 2016 7:39 am
dracowave says...



Hi I have a story named Return to Oblivion Draft that i would like for you to review/critique. It includes the prologue and the first chapter. Thanks in advance
  





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Sat Dec 31, 2016 2:48 am
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Featherstone says...



Hey @CarryOnMrCaulfield,

This is closed. Unfortunately I couldn't figure out how to post that on the tag, so here I am now explaining. After this I'll just make a post that says 'closed.' Shoulda done that earlier. Sorry. At any rate, when I eventually open this up again I will be happy to look through those.

Good luck writing!

Apologies,

Feather
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Sat Dec 31, 2016 2:49 am
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CLOSED
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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