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The Witch's Beehive



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Thu Oct 13, 2016 3:32 am
mellifera says...



Welcome!
Come to feed me? Wonderful! All the information for providing me with a meal is below!


Disclaimer: Please know that I am free to turn away any request, whether it is a personal choice or because I do not think I can provide a helpful review. Also note that I am busy, and cannot always respond to a request right away, but know that I will get to it as soon as possible!

Things I Will Review

-Novel Chapters (I will review up to three chapters of choice. I may or may not follow up with more, but the starting limit is three)
-Short Stories
-Scripts (I am willing to try this but please keep in mind that I know next to nothing about this and will most likely focus on the story or characters)
-Poetry (Again, willing to try it, but I know very little about poetry and the ins and outs)

I am okay with any ratings.

Preferred Genres

-Action / Adventure
-Fantasy
-Mystery / Suspense
-Narrative
-Realistic
-Science Fiction

Genres I Am Okay With

-Horror
-Literature
-Humour
-Romantic
-Supernatural
-Teen Fiction
-Historical Fiction (but note I'm not really a history person so meh)

Genres I Won't Review

-Lyrical
-Politics
-Review
-Nonfiction

Things I Will Not Review

-Articles
-Essays
-Lyrics

Other Stuff

-I think it should go without saying that anything I say in a review is my own opinion. I am never trying to be harsh or unkind to anyone, but I will be honest. I am offering my constructive criticism in the hope that I will be helpful to you and your work. If I ever say anything offensive, I sincerely apologise.

-If I seem to be taking a long time to review, don't hesitate to poke me!

-If you have any questions, please feel free to ask!


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Thanks for stopping by! Have a lovely day <3
Last edited by mellifera on Fri Mar 30, 2018 11:43 pm, edited 9 times in total.
I believe in a universe that doesn't care and people that do.

You and I, we are matter, and it matters.

they/them
  





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Thu Oct 20, 2016 6:37 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I can always use reviews on any of my stories. I'll just give you the list

The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Prologue
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 1.1
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 1.2 - The Last Straw
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 1.3 - The Last Straw
The Elder Scrolls: Escape - Chapter 1.4 (Finale) ~ The Last Straw
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.1 - Wildfire
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.2 - Wildfire
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.3 - Wildfire (Finale)
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 3.1 - Freedom
For the Kindness You Once Showed Me
Tick Tock
Secrets
Would You Like Some Cake?
The Little Wizard
Unlucky Ricky
Escape
A Soldier's Death
The Measure of a Hero
This Bed Is So Cold...
By Its Cover
Winter's Hope
I Am With You
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.1 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.2 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.3 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.4 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.5 (Final) - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.1 - Look Who Crashed the Party
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.2 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.3 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.4 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.5 (Final) - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.1 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.2 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.3 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.4 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.5 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.6 Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.7 (Final) - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 4.1 - No Going Home
Z-Day: It Was a Perfect Day
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 1
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 2
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 3
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 4
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 5
Z-Day: Load-Up ~ Part 6
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 7(Finale)
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.1
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.2
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.3
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.4
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.5 (Finale)
  





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Tue Jan 09, 2018 11:17 pm
mellifera says...



re-opening and the first post has been redone
I believe in a universe that doesn't care and people that do.

You and I, we are matter, and it matters.

they/them
  





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Wed Jan 10, 2018 10:53 am
Slobst says...



Hey! If you don't mind reading scripts It would be amazing if you reviewed Grow Out - First Scene for me.

Grow out is a coming of age story that follows a teenager who's terrified of the future, haunted by the past and coming to terms with his sexuality

Fair warning though this scene is pretty anti-religion so if you're not into that maybe skip this one
  





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Wed Jan 10, 2018 8:11 pm
mellifera says...



Done! :D
I believe in a universe that doesn't care and people that do.

You and I, we are matter, and it matters.

they/them
  





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Points: 14090
Reviews: 351
Fri Mar 30, 2018 5:36 pm
mellifera says...



bump
I believe in a universe that doesn't care and people that do.

You and I, we are matter, and it matters.

they/them
  








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