Young Writers Society

I want to review again, but I'm also very busy as of late. So I decided that I'm going to start a review thread where I will only review poetry. Poetry is short and easy to read, but my reviews will be long and hopefully extremely helpful. I'll spend less time reading the work and more time working on a review (when I review chapters it takes me very long to read as I am not a fast reader). I'll help with your grammar, story and other things.

So fill out this form and wait for your sweet, sweet review :3

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Title:peculiar galaxies on the insides of my hollow bones.
Link: peculiar galaxies on the insides of my hollow bones.
Genre(s):General
Other Information (requests):None

Hello marmalade,

I am submitting this piece of poetry for a scholarship contest, and could really use some of your expert feedback.

It was written about a friend of mine, who recently lost her son.

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Title: Mournings After
Link: Mournings After
Genre(s): Dramatic?
Other Information (requests): None

Thanks for your time!

-mav

Title: Fearing the Storm
Link: Fearing the Storm
Genre: General
Other Information (requests): none

Title: The Worry Child
Link: The Worry Child
Genre(s): Internal struggle
Other Information (requests): I'm trying to progress as a poet and I would like both advice on the poem but also general advice based on what I've written which I can apply to other poems I write.