Young Writers Society

Hey guys, it's Whitlinger here looking for works to review. I will pretty much review anything, including fanfiction. For novel chapters that are pretty far into the story, I probably won't read the previous chapters unless I need to. When the number of requests hits 10 I'll close requests temporarily until I can get to all of them.

I try to be balanced in my reviews by listing as many positives as negatives, if not more. I also try not to be too blunt or harsh in my criticisms. Basically, I don't bite.

Ok, that's all. Happy writing. :]

Cheers,
Whitlinger

Hey there, could you please review:

Heroes of Aldrizhon (Prologue & Chapter 1)

Heroes of Aldrizhon (Chapter II, III & IV)

Heroes of Aldrizhon (Chapter V and VI)

Heroes of Aldrizhon (Chapter 7)

Heroes of Aldrizhon (Chapter 8)

I know it's a lot, so take your time. Thanks in advance!

I could use some reviewing of my newest novel. Please let me know what you think.

The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Prologue

hey! if you could review my short story that would be swell! here it is Sweet Tangerine

Please review my three works!!!
Note: they are best to be read in order

Hello Whitlinger,


I am submitting this poem for a scholarship contest, and could really use some feedback. Whatever you have time for would be wonderful, but I'd really appreciate a thorough shredding of this piece. Please be brutal! I can take it.

It was written about a friend of mine, who recently lost her son.

See link here: Mournings After


Thanks!

-mav

I can always use reviews on any of my stories. I'll just give you the list

The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Prologue
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 1.1
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 1.2 - The Last Straw
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 1.3 - The Last Straw
The Elder Scrolls: Escape - Chapter 1.4 (Finale) ~ The Last Straw
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.1 - Wildfire
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.2 - Wildfire
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.3 - Wildfire (Finale)
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 3.1 - Freedom
For the Kindness You Once Showed Me
Tick Tock
Secrets
Would You Like Some Cake?
The Little Wizard
Unlucky Ricky
Escape
A Soldier's Death
The Measure of a Hero
This Bed Is So Cold...
By Its Cover
Winter's Hope
I Am With You
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.1 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.2 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.3 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.4 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.5 (Final) - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.1 - Look Who Crashed the Party
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.2 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.3 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.4 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.5 (Final) - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.1 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.2 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.3 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.4 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.5 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.6 Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.7 (Final) - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 4.1 - No Going Home
Z-Day: It Was a Perfect Day
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 1
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 2
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 3
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 4
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 5
Z-Day: Load-Up ~ Part 6
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 7(Finale)
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.1
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.2
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.3
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.4
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.5 (Finale)