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Fri Jun 03, 2016 2:05 pm
Desdemona says...



Hiya :3 I'm looking to earn 5 stars in reviews by the end of summer, so I offer reviews! My specialties are novel chapters amd short stories, but I'll try to review anything you give me. My reviews are often long and detailed whenever I have time, which will be all the time during the summer holidays. However, they do tend to strike some people as rude, but I don't intend for them to be. Anyways, drop links down below, and I'll look at all of them ^^
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Sat Jun 04, 2016 2:12 pm
felistia says...



Hi, Felistia here. :D

I would really like you to review my novel please.
It's a fantasy, action\adventure novel. It is a slight fanfic to the Wings of Fire series, but you don't need to know anything from those books to be able to read the story. I just need someone to treat it just like a book. Ignore the fanfic. :D
I really need someone to go through all the chapters please. :D
Here are all the links
Here are the links.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-1-129967

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-2-129968

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-3-129969

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-4-129970

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-5-129971

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-6-129972

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-7-129973

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-8-129974

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-9-129975

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-10-129976

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-11-129977

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-12-129979

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-13-129980

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-14-129981

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-15-129982

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-16-129983

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-17-129984

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-18-129985


Thanks for your time
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Thu Jun 09, 2016 2:56 am
yizhongt says...



Hey there, could you please review the chapters I have uploaded for WIP novel Starlight?

Starlight: Prologue
  





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Fri Jun 10, 2016 6:37 pm
artbyandream says...



I seriously need someone to review the first chapter of my novel 'River Dreams' its a paranormal romance (its not a vampire werewolf thing) . Brutality is okay with me, honesty is the best!


River Dreams Chapter One: What the darkness carries

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Fri Jun 10, 2016 6:47 pm
artbyandream says...



I seriously need someone to review the first chapter of my novel 'River Dreams' its a paranormal romance (its not a vampire werewolf thing) . Brutality is okay with me, honesty is the best!


River Dreams Chapter One: What the darkness carries

Thank you!!
  





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Sun Jun 19, 2016 8:49 am
Eros says...



Hi,
This is Eros here!
Please will you review my new novel, ALIENS SPACESHIP
This chapter 1. Its a sci-fi novel about aliens and spaceships.
  





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Wed Jul 20, 2016 7:25 pm
Laurenh6 says...



Hey,

I think you read my Watching story chapter - if you don't remember I put a link there .. But please could you reivew the second chapter ? Thank you so much

Here's the links

Watching

Watching Chapter 2


Thank you for your consideration :)
  





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Sat Jul 23, 2016 5:37 am
AnarchyWolf says...



Good morning Desdemona. I wondered if you'd be able to review my work 'Werewolfing'?

-AnarchyWolf
Don't resist the water. Welcome it.
  








It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
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