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Fri Jun 03, 2016 2:05 pm
Desdemona says...



Hiya :3 I'm looking to earn 5 stars in reviews by the end of summer, so I offer reviews! My specialties are novel chapters amd short stories, but I'll try to review anything you give me. My reviews are often long and detailed whenever I have time, which will be all the time during the summer holidays. However, they do tend to strike some people as rude, but I don't intend for them to be. Anyways, drop links down below, and I'll look at all of them ^^
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Sat Jun 04, 2016 2:12 pm
felistia says...



Hi, Felistia here. :D

I would really like you to review my novel please.
It's a fantasy, action\adventure novel. It is a slight fanfic to the Wings of Fire series, but you don't need to know anything from those books to be able to read the story. I just need someone to treat it just like a book. Ignore the fanfic. :D
I really need someone to go through all the chapters please. :D
Here are all the links
Here are the links.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-1-129967

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-2-129968

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-3-129969

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-4-129970

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-5-129971

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-6-129972

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-7-129973

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-8-129974

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-9-129975

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-10-129976

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-11-129977

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-12-129979

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-13-129980

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-14-129981

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-15-129982

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-16-129983

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-17-129984

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-18-129985


Thanks for your time
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Thu Jun 09, 2016 2:56 am
yizhongt says...



Hey there, could you please review the chapters I have uploaded for WIP novel Starlight?

Starlight: Prologue
  





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Fri Jun 10, 2016 6:37 pm
artbyandream says...



I seriously need someone to review the first chapter of my novel 'River Dreams' its a paranormal romance (its not a vampire werewolf thing) . Brutality is okay with me, honesty is the best!


River Dreams Chapter One: What the darkness carries

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Fri Jun 10, 2016 6:47 pm
artbyandream says...



I seriously need someone to review the first chapter of my novel 'River Dreams' its a paranormal romance (its not a vampire werewolf thing) . Brutality is okay with me, honesty is the best!


River Dreams Chapter One: What the darkness carries

Thank you!!
  





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Sun Jun 19, 2016 8:49 am
Eros says...



Hi,
This is Eros here!
Please will you review my new novel, ALIENS SPACESHIP
This chapter 1. Its a sci-fi novel about aliens and spaceships.
  





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Wed Jul 20, 2016 7:25 pm
Laurenh6 says...



Hey,

I think you read my Watching story chapter - if you don't remember I put a link there .. But please could you reivew the second chapter ? Thank you so much

Here's the links

Watching

Watching Chapter 2


Thank you for your consideration :)
  





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Sat Jul 23, 2016 5:37 am
AnarchyWolf says...



Good morning Desdemona. I wondered if you'd be able to review my work 'Werewolfing'?

-AnarchyWolf
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