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Hiya Mage, could you please review,

Title Engulfed chapter one
link Engulfed- Chapter one
Description It's a story about a Boy who wants to disappear from existence after his mother's sudden death and about a girl who lives in a completely different world than Earth.

Thank you! ^-^

Your review is done, @writerkitty! I hope it helps you out.

I was wondering if you could check out Withdrawal for me? It has a trigger warning because it's about recovering from self-harm, so I completely understand if you'd rather not.

I can definitely review it, @RoseAndThorn! Do you mind if I wait until the first day of July to do so? I understand if you want me to do it sooner.

That's fine! I don't mind waiting.

I reviewed it! I hope my review did your work justice. If you have any questions or want me to review something else, don't be afraid to come to me!

Hello Mage!

Work: Knowing Gods- first chapter
Link: Knowing Gods- Chapter 1- Late again...
Brief Description: Willow, Leah and Uri make their way to school but Uri disappears half way through only to be found hanging around the school entrance. Willow notices he's acting strangely but can't get a straight answer for him.
Other: I may also request another chapter but we will see.

Thank you ^_^

Hello, Mage!

Work: Hope, Fill Dark Places - Prologue
Link: Hope, Fill Dark Places - Prologue
Brief Description: A troubled and depressed teenage girl finds herself in an asylum.
Other: I'm hoping you'll follow the next parts when they come out... but who knows.

Thanks so much for taking the time! :3

Hi Mage!!!

Please review my new novel's first three parts which equal chapter one. The first is at Joan and James (The 2nd part of the first chapter)

Thank you !
Sheadun

Thanks for the requests, everyone!

I'll do the reviews in the order that I received the requests. I'll review @occymay's chapter tomorrow, @RubyRed's prologue, the day after tomorrow and each of @Sheadun's parts for her first chapter on the days after that. I hope my reviews will help all of you out!

@occymay, @RubyRed, and @Sheadun, I'm really sorry, but I forgot about I forgot about something I had promised to review! I'm going to review it today and push everything in this forum off a day.

No problem Mage. Take your time

Yeah, that's fine ^_^

Your review is done, @occymay! I help it improves your writing and gives you something to smile about!

Thank you so much, yeah it was really good