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The Mage's Tower



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Sun Jun 26, 2016 6:26 pm
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ANADIR says...



Hey! This is a pretty tall request, so PLEASE feel free to say no. I have a book (~250 pages) that is currently in beta reading stage and I'm looking for a few more beta readers. It's mostly fantasy, and if you're willingto /have enough time to do it, I would really appreciate it. Thanks either way!
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Mon Jun 27, 2016 11:32 am
Mageheart says...



I'm really sorry, @ANADIR. I'd be willing to do it, but I just don't have the time. But thank you for asking me. :D
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Mon Jun 27, 2016 7:37 pm
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ANADIR says...



Of course, I completely understand. Thanks for the response, and if you happen to know anyone who would be interested, please direct them my way. :)
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Mon Jun 27, 2016 7:44 pm
Mageheart says...



Will do! :D
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roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Tue Jun 28, 2016 5:11 pm
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haredrier says...



Would you mind reviewing the first 3 chapters of my story? There's more coming but this is all I have for now:

Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 1

Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 2

Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 3
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Wed Jun 29, 2016 12:47 pm
Mageheart says...



Sure thing, @haredrier! I'll do it as soon as possible! :D
mage

[ she/her, but in a boy kinda way ]

roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Wed Jun 29, 2016 1:23 pm
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Kazumi says...



ayyyy

So, yeah. I have two requests though. One, a flashfic about Manila. Again.

The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

Second, I'm not gonna tell, nor am I going to show it, but it's associated with the word "Inferno." Don't worry though, it's gonna come to you in time.

For The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila, please treat this flashfic like poetry, but in prose. Please consider all details before writing the review, because this is some sort of satire, and I'm tryna relay a message that is both universal and Philippine.

Thanks for taking the time to read this, and best of luck in your future endeavors.
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Sat Jul 02, 2016 9:17 pm
Mageheart says...



I'd be happy to review your story! It just might take awhile, but I'll try to review it as soon as possible! :D
mage

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roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Fri Jul 08, 2016 3:45 am
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writerkitty says...



Hi Mage! ^_^
Can you review The Myth- Chapter one; Worst day ever. ?
It already has a lot of reviews, but I made a few slight changes to it and I'm hoping to re-write the entire novel. So can you please check it out for me?
(Oh, and it's okay if you take awhile to review it! ^_^)

Thank you!
I hope you have an awesome day! :D

Just keep writing, writing, WRITING! :D
  





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Fri Jul 08, 2016 12:21 pm
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Mageheart says...



I would love to! I'm very interested it from the roleplays we've done. It will definitely take me awhile to do, but I'll try to review it as soon as possible! :D
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roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Sun Jul 10, 2016 8:16 pm
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AnarchyWolf says...



Hey Mage,

Could I have a review on the first chapter of a new thing I'm working on?

-AnarchyWolf
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Sun Jul 10, 2016 10:36 pm
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Laurenh6 says...



Hey there! Is there any chance you could review my most recent version of the Watching - it's an improved version ... It's only the first chapter :) .. If not don't worry but thanks :)
  





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Sun Jul 10, 2016 10:55 pm
Mageheart says...



I'd be happy to review your works! It just is going to take awhile. Also, I'm sorry for not reviewing the works I promised to, everyone!
mage

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roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Sun Jul 31, 2016 1:01 pm
Mageheart says...



I'm all caught up on here now! Sorry for taking so long, everyone!
mage

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queer and here.
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 8:29 pm
Mageheart says...



Start of the Rebooted Thread

Check out the first post for more information!
mage

[ she/her, but in a boy kinda way ]

roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  








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