Young Writers Society

Hi, Gymnast2801 here!
I am still pretty new to this site but I think I can take on some reviews now! Please post below if you would like me to review your work (I don't review anything with too much language or anything super inappropriate). So feel free to leave a post below!

Also, I am writing a story called The Lion Age #1: Hunted. My latest post has been up for around a week and still has 0 reviews so if you would like to review that then that would be an amazing help!! Here is the link:

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Hi, Felistia here.

I would really like you to review my novel please.
It's a fantasy, action\adventure novel. It is a slight fanfic to the Wings of Fire series, but you don't need to know anything from those books to be able to read the story. I just need someone to treat it just like a book. Ignore the fanfic.
I really need someone to go through all the chapters please.
Here are the links.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-1-129967

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-2-129968

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-3-129969

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-4-129970

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-5-129971

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-6-129972

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-7-129973

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-8-129974

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-9-129975

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-10-129976

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-11-129977

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-12-129979

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-13-129980

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-14-129981

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-15-129982

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-16-129983

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-17-129984

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Quest-for-Fire-Book-one--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-18-129985


Thanks for your time

Hey there,

I would really appreciate it if you could review all the current chapters of my WIP novel, Starlight. It's a science fiction-fantasy novel.

Starlight: Prologue

Thanks in advance!