Young Writers Society

Hello there.
I had this idea for quite a while.
I am always interested in finding new works to read and review. So why not let you guys decide my next review?
Comment the link of your aork and what you want me to look at(only edit, opinion, or both).
Do not be shy. ~
I will try my best to review every one of the requested works.
Do not forget to leave the genre of the work, also.



So for the ones who want to be full with their requesting comment, comment :
1. Link of work.
2. What you want me to look at mostly(u can say everything)
3.Do you want full edit or only parts
4.Genre of work
5. Length (words)

I'm just looking for someone to read and review the first five chapters of my romantic novel: Chicago

Up for the challenge??
Chicago

Sure! I will do my best.

So, I kind of want a bit more feedback on my main novel, Dream-Hunters. Since the entire thing's around 37,000 words at the moment, I'll just link you a chapter I'm dubious about.

Dream-Hunters - Chapter Seven

It's an action-adventure supernatural novel, though this chapter features a bit of romance, hence why I'm a bit unsure. So if you could focus on character relationships and portrayals, that'd be great. I think I've already edited out the grammar and spelling kinks.

Sorry that this one's also a bit mired in plot. Although, feel free to read the previous chapters if you want to understand. (First-class subtle advertising right there.)

It's 1679 words in length, and I'd appreciate thoroughness. Thank you!

I will try my best when I can. @Chaser

Can you review my poem please

1. Link of work.
Homeless Homesickness
2. What you want me to look at mostly(u can say everything)
everything except grammar
3.Do you want full edit or only parts
I don't care
4.Genre of work
poetry
5. Length (words)
201 words

Hello, @GreatKing. I'm Mage. I was wondering if you could review the first chapter I have uploaded of my current project, The Case of Schadel Kueper. It's the first book in a fantasy and mystery series set in modern day America. I would really appreciate some more input on it.

1.) Link of Work: The Case of Schadel Kueper: Chapter 1
2.) What You Want Me to Look at Mostly(u can say everything): Everything
3.) Do You Want Full Edit or Only Parts: Only parts, although I would prefer opinions over edits.
4.) Genre of Work: Mystery, Fantasy, Supernatural
5.) Length (Words): 1,330

If you like the first chapter, could you also review the other chapters I've posted?

Thank you if you review, and if you decide not to, thank you for considering it.

Hey there, could you please review all my entries for my WIP novel Starlight? Here's the link to the prologue:
Starlight: Prologue

If you can focus on editting and correcting spelling and grammar mistakes, that'll be smashing. Thanks in advance!

Hey. Do u mind helping me by giving me your opinion regarding my poems?

profile/bloomcadbury/portfolio/461179

thanks

Hey! Can you review and follow my novel Atana? It's a sci-fi mystery novel. So far I have three chapters on YWS, but I'm writing the fourth now.

Atana: Chapter 1 (1316 words)
Atana: Chapter 2 (841 words)
Atana: Chapter 3 (1501 words)

Thanks <3
marmalade