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Tue Apr 26, 2016 8:17 pm
AnarchyWolf says...



Hello. AnarchyWolf here for you if you need a review. Yay.

I will review
-Stories and stuff [both short stories and novel chapters]
-Essays

Genres that I like/know about
-Urban fantasy
-Action/adventure
-Smidges of Sci-fi [honestly, it depends on the setting of the story]
-Thriller
-Gothic horror
-Crime fiction

Genres that I dislike/don't know as much about
-Romance (although, a romantic subplot is cool)
-Teen fiction
-Women's fiction
-Historical fiction

I will not review
-Poetry
-Fanfiction (for anything I'm not in the fandom of. Ask to clarify)
-Anything too long. Please, nothing over 5000 words

Just make sure you:
-Link to the work
-Tell me the genre and wordcount
-Don't give me an entire novel to review. Just one chapter at a time
-Give a short summary if it's a chapter from the middle of a novel

I'm willing to give almost anything a read, so don't worry about it being too violent or sexual. I'll also try to be fairly punctual with my reviews, so if it takes more than, say, two days, then feel free to remind me or something.

Now, something to note: My reviews are usually honest. I'll tell you exactly what I think and exactly where you went wrong. This has the potential to come across somewhat harshly. Please take this into account.

Don't let that put you off.

-AnarchyWolf
Last edited by AnarchyWolf on Fri Jun 10, 2016 9:56 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Wed Apr 27, 2016 12:35 am
Jyva says...



heres a chance for revenge

1000 words from page 80 of ma book

i feel that I'm not writing fight scenes well enough. since one's about to come up, heres this for you to review so i can fix any weaknesses i have.

it's historical fiction/drama and the excerpt is 1000 words.
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Wed Apr 27, 2016 6:55 am
AnarchyWolf says...



@Jyva review done :) It's a great piece of writing.

-AnarchyWolf
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Wed Apr 27, 2016 11:41 pm
Jyva says...



AnarchyWolf wrote:@Jyva review done :) It's a great piece of writing.

-AnarchyWolf


ah i forgot to say thanks here
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Thu Apr 28, 2016 5:47 am
Chaser says...



Hello there, I'm Chaser. Could trifle you for a review?

Dream-Hunters - Chapter Twenty-One

An action-adventure/supernatural/horror(?) work of 2721 words.

Essentially, this is around halfway into the story, where the nightmares are forced to stall the villain, a renegade nightmare, so that the heroes can pass the trials to get their relic that can defeat him. Long story short, the villain's a bit too powerful to be stalled, things get out of hand, and crap hits the fan hard for the nightmares.

Feel free to be as brutal as you want. As a writer, I qualify as an emotional masochist.
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Thu Apr 28, 2016 4:21 pm
AnarchyWolf says...



@Chaser - the review's all done. Sorry it took a while.

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Wed May 11, 2016 8:42 pm
AnarchyWolf says...



Just bumping it up
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Wed Jun 08, 2016 4:38 pm
Maricore says...



Hello!
I would like u to review my first chapter of my novel
The Heart Of An Eve.
It talkes about a prince who was kidnapped and tunrned to a cyborg by his nation's scientists and ten he is basicly angry, and his father is forcing him into marriage now.
The story is sci fi and action.
The heart of an Eve_ Chapter 1: forced marriage
Here it is!
Thank u!
  








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