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Fri Oct 06, 2017 6:35 pm
Jyva says...



Kyllorac wrote:Hello there! I don't believe I've ever gotten a review from you, so let's change that.

Keep Driving

I'd be particularly interested in your impressions of the overall tone of the piece, as well as your interpretation of what is actually going on in the story.


done
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Mon Nov 20, 2017 1:15 pm
ChocoDanish says...



i need help with my tenses n my pace. pick whichever u like

Beginning (part1)
Family and Friends (part2)
Fluffs (part3)
i'm nice most of the time but i'm no saint
  





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Sat Jan 20, 2018 8:35 pm
camusic says...



please review this Seltas's first kill I'd rather brutally honest then well not.
  





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Wed Jan 24, 2018 10:41 am
Jyva says...



Kyllorac wrote:Hello there! I don't believe I've ever gotten a review from you, so let's change that.

Keep Driving

I'd be particularly interested in your impressions of the overall tone of the piece, as well as your interpretation of what is actually going on in the story.


done
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Fri Mar 30, 2018 11:34 pm
manilla says...



You could review my "Danser" series.

"Danser" Pt. 1
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Mon Apr 09, 2018 6:12 pm
eiaeh9 says...



Please review my piece Butterflies Out of the Wings at Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Many thanks
Last edited by eiaeh9 on Mon Apr 09, 2018 6:19 pm, edited 3 times in total.
  





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Mon Apr 09, 2018 6:16 pm
eiaeh9 says...



Please review my piece Butterflies Out of the Wings at Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Many thanks
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 6:58 am
MasterAvi says...



Eyyy can you review my prison escape introduction and chapter 1 please? Be very harsh I want to improve!
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 1:51 pm
Jyva says...



MasterAvi wrote:Eyyy can you review my prison escape introduction and chapter 1 please? Be very harsh I want to improve!
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1


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Sun Apr 15, 2018 1:56 pm
Jyva says...



camusic wrote:please review this Seltas's first kill I'd rather brutally honest then well not.


forgot to mark this as done
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Tue Feb 26, 2019 3:30 am
Jyva says...



reviving this thread, i got new stuff to post which means i gotta do some reviews qq
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