Kyllorac wrote:Hello there! I don't believe I've ever gotten a review from you, so let's change that.Keep DrivingI'd be particularly interested in your impressions of the overall tone of the piece, as well as your interpretation of what is actually going on in the story.
MasterAvi wrote:Eyyy can you review my prison escape introduction and chapter 1 please? Be very harsh I want to improve!The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1
camusic wrote:please review this Seltas's first kill I'd rather brutally honest then well not.
Miraculor77 wrote:So I'm kinda scared to ask for a review from you, but here goes anyway. I' writing a novel called Code: Delete, which seems to fall under realistic teen fiction with dystopian elements. It's set in the future. I have two chapters below that I want some feedback on:Chapter 12: FootprintChapter 14: CoffeeYou don't have to do both; if you could do even one I would really appreciate it.- Mira
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