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Thu Apr 07, 2016 8:54 pm
InfiniteRectangles says...



Hello! Are you looking for someone to review your work? Looking for an honest reviewer who can provide you with constructive criticism to help you improve your work? Well, you have come to the right place!

Things I Will Review
[*]Poetry
[*]Short Stories
[*]Novel chapters as long as they are close enough to the beginning for me to be able to follow the plot.
[*]Essays
[*]Other (maybe)

I will not review fanfic, mostly because I won't know enough about the characters to be able to provide a thorough, helpful review. If you could provide me with some background information on the people the fanfic is about, then maybe I would review it.

As you can see, I'll pretty much review most things. And don't worry about a piece being too violent, smutty, etc. I honestly don't care about the rating. I'll review it anyway.

I will try to get your reviews done within 3 days, but if I don't, feel free to post again. I may not have gotten a notification about it.
Last edited by InfiniteRectangles on Sat Apr 09, 2016 10:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Thu Apr 07, 2016 11:45 pm
Vervain says...



Hey there! I'd love to kickstart this thread of yours with a request -- could I possibly get a review on Absolute :: Prologue if that's okay?
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Fri Apr 08, 2016 12:14 am
InfiniteRectangles says...



@Lareine Read and reviewed! A lovely start to a novel, by the way! :)
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Fri Apr 08, 2016 1:05 am
yizhongt says...



Hey there, could you please review:

Starlight: Prologue

and

Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part I)

Thanks in advance!
  





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Fri Apr 08, 2016 3:04 am
InfiniteRectangles says...



@yizhongt done and done! :)
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Sat Apr 09, 2016 12:42 am
yizhongt says...



Hey infiniterectangles, could you please review:

Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part II)

Really appreciate the feedback you gave the last time. Thanks in advance!
  





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Sat Apr 09, 2016 1:35 am
InfiniteRectangles says...



@yizhongt done! :)
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Sat Apr 09, 2016 3:17 am
RubyRed says...



Hey would you review The Heart of a Warrior ch. 1 for me? If you reviewed the following chapter that would be great as well. Thanks so much!!! :D
You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote

Review link below!
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Sun Apr 10, 2016 2:18 pm
yizhongt says...



Hey infiniterectangles, could you please review:

Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part I)

Thanks in advance!
  





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Tue Apr 12, 2016 1:56 am
Storygirl95 says...



Hi, InfiniteRectangles!

I'd be . . . infinitely grateful if you'd review my short story. :P
I'm sorry haha

I was planning on (possibly) sending it into a contest soon. There are more than likely things I need to fix before it goes anywhere. :)

Thanks in advance if you have time! :D

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Mon Apr 18, 2016 4:17 pm
mysterygirl says...



Hello! I was wondering if you could pretty please review my latest work (linked below)? If you can, thanks in advance! It will be very appreciated. :P

Safety: Prologue and Chapter 1
all i want is freedom, a world with no more night, and you always beside me, to hold me and to hide me -- "Phantom of the Opera"

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Sat Jun 04, 2016 2:07 pm
felistia says...



Hi InfiniteRectangles, Felistia here. :D

I would really like you to review my novel please.
It's a fantasy, action\adventure novel. It is a slight fanfic to the Wings of Fire series, but you don't need to know anything from those books to be able to read the story. I just need someone to treat it just like a book. Ignore the fanfic. :D
I really need someone to go through all the chapters please. :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/The-Quest-for-Fire-Book-One--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-1-124445
Thanks for your time
  





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Wed Jun 08, 2016 1:16 am
Calliope3 says...



Hi InfiniteRectangles! Could you please review this poem of mine?

Things Which Are Seen

Thanks in advance! :)
  





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Wed Jun 08, 2016 4:28 pm
Maricore says...



Hello!
I need a review on my two chapters from my black contamination novel :) it will be most appreciated :D

Black Contamination_ chapter 1: our silent farewell

Black Contamination_ chapter 2: A new start

Hard review is most wanted :P
  





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Thu Oct 20, 2016 6:41 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I can always use reviews on any of my stories. I'll just give you the list

The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Prologue
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 1.1
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 1.2 - The Last Straw
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 1.3 - The Last Straw
The Elder Scrolls: Escape - Chapter 1.4 (Finale) ~ The Last Straw
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.1 - Wildfire
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.2 - Wildfire
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.3 - Wildfire (Finale)
The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 3.1 - Freedom
For the Kindness You Once Showed Me
Tick Tock
Secrets
Would You Like Some Cake?
The Little Wizard
Unlucky Ricky
Escape
A Soldier's Death
The Measure of a Hero
This Bed Is So Cold...
By Its Cover
Winter's Hope
I Am With You
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.1 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.2 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.3 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.4 - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.5 (Final) - First Meetings
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.1 - Look Who Crashed the Party
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.2 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.3 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.4 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.5 (Final) - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.1 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.2 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.3 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.4 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.5 - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.6 Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 3.7 (Final) - Transformation
Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 4.1 - No Going Home
Z-Day: It Was a Perfect Day
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 1
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 2
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 3
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 4
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 5
Z-Day: Load-Up ~ Part 6
Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 7(Finale)
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.1
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.2
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.3
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.4
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.5 (Finale)
  








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