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Wed Feb 24, 2016 12:58 am
RubyRed says...



Post the link to any type of work and I will go to the link and review them for you. Don't post more than one work at a time though give me the chance to review someone else's work. Also, if you find that my review wasn't helpful to you then please pm me and give me some tips as to how I can improve myself. If I haven't reviewed your work within three days (I doubt I'll ever take that long) then post your work again. It's possible that I might not have gotten a notification. :smt023
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Wed Feb 24, 2016 4:03 am
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bluewaterlily says...



Hi, could you please review this poem for me?

To Turn a Spark Into a Forest Fire


Thanks so much!
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Wed Feb 24, 2016 3:10 pm
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RubyRed says...



bluewaterlily wrote:Hi, could you please review this poem for me?

To Turn a Spark Into a Forest Fire


Thanks so much!


I hope my review was helpful if not please pm me and give me some tips. :-D
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Sun Feb 28, 2016 7:40 am
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dracowave says...



Hey Keepwriting I'd be really happy if you could review the first chapter of my novel for me here's the link: The Seven Heavenly Kings Revamped
  





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Mon Feb 29, 2016 7:43 pm
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dracowave wrote:Hey Keepwriting I'd be really happy if you could review the first chapter of my novel for me here's the link: The Seven Heavenly Kings Revamped


I hope my review was helpful to you, @dracowave. If you would like me to review something else then please post the link. :D
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Wed Mar 02, 2016 10:03 pm
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BlueJayWalker10 says...



Hey! I'm Jay Walker. I'm really unsure as to how good all my works are, though I already have a couple reviews on my works. I love to as many opinions as possible. (I really value other people's opinions.)
If possible, I'd like for you to all four chapters of Words Written in Lighting, but it's okay if you only do the first chapter--as I understand that you have other people who wish to have their works reviewed.
Words Written in Lightning is a Action/Adventure Fantasy Novel.
The first chapter is here:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 1
Thanks!
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Sun Mar 06, 2016 3:34 pm
RubyRed says...



Hey, @BlueJayWalker10 I hope my review helped you! If you'd like me to review another one of your works then please post the link here :arrow: :D
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Sun Mar 06, 2016 5:38 pm
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BlueJayWalker10 says...



@Keepwriting
It really did! Thanks.
Actually, I'd love for you to review the second chapter of "Words Written in Lighting", if you don't mind.
Thanks!
Here's the link:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2
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Wed Mar 09, 2016 2:22 am
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speakerskat says...



Could you please review this? Mary-Jane Elizabeth III
Salt in the air, blood in my veins, no more black clouds, just colorful days...
  





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Wed Mar 09, 2016 3:35 am
RubyRed says...



Sorry, @BlueJayWalker10 for not getting to your review quickly I will get to it tomorrow. Sorry for the inconvenience.
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Wed Mar 09, 2016 5:28 am
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BlueJayWalker10 says...



@Keepwriting
Oh, it's okay! No problem--I understand that y'alls have lives and aren't just blockheads that write and review on YWS 24/7.
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Thu Mar 10, 2016 2:56 am
RubyRed says...



Hope my review was helpful to you. If you'd like me to review something else please post the link below. :D
You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
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Sun Mar 13, 2016 1:24 am
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Sins says...



Hi there!

It would be awesome if you could take a lot at the opening chapter of my novel for me. No need to rush or anything :)

A Pocket Full of Posies (1)

Please and thank you :3
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Mon Mar 14, 2016 7:20 pm
RubyRed says...



I hope my review was helpful to you @speakerskat. Keep writing! And if you need another review just post the link! :D
You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote

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Mon Mar 14, 2016 8:16 pm
RubyRed says...



I hope my review was worth asking for, @Skins. If you think it was helpful and would like another review then please post another link below. :D :D
You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote

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Knight of the Green Room
  








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