Young Writers Society

Hi, Keepwriting!

I was wondering if you could help me out by reviewing my short story I recently wrote. I was planning on (possibly) sending it into a contest soon. My friends like it, but I would really like to have the opinion of someone who reviews work often (and is great at it like you!) like you and knows what to look for. I don't mind polishing it (obviously haha), or even not sending it in general if we find something (and I'm sure we will) that needs to be fixed before submitting.

Thank you in advance for your time.

Light Shines Even In Darkness

Hello again! I was wondering if I could get a review on the first half of the first chapter to my story this time? c: [This one is probably gonna have way more flaws than the last ]

Elysium - Chapter 1 [Part 1]

Thankies <3

Hey @Keepwriting, could you please review:

Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part I)

Thanks in advance!

I hope my review was helpful to you, @Storygirl95. If you would like another please feel free to ask anytime! As for @Elesium and @yizhongt. Thank you for your patience. I will get to reviewing your works ASAP. I've been busy lately so please accept my apologies!

Thanks for your patience, @Elesium and @yizhongt. If you would like another review feel free to ask!

Hello! Can you review my work please. I plan on uploading the third chapter soon, and meanwhile can you please review first two? Together they are 2,600 words long, not too much

James. E. -Chapter 1-
Chapter 1

James. E. -Chapter 2.1-
Chapter 2 part 1/2

James. E. -Chapter 2.2-
chapter 2 part 2/2

Thanks a lot in advance.

Hey, its mysterygirl! Remember me? Haha. *hides*
Anyway, I'm just wondering if you can review my latest work (linked below)? It would be much obliged!

Safety: Prologue and Chapter 1

Hi Hi! Finally back with the last of chapter one ;P

Elysium Chapter 1 [Part 2]

Danke!

Hello!
Could you please review my first chapter
The clan of the dead_Chapter one: The origins
Thank you!

Hey, guys--all who are subbed to my thread. Sorry for no replies I have been absent for a year. But I'm back now! So fire away with your requests, and I will do my best to critique your works!

I'd like you to review all the chapter but this is the chapter I need help with the most.

There's So Much More To Juno Moon: chapter 3

thank you <3

There ya go @primadonna! I reviewed all three because I simply don't have the smarts to jump into the middle of a story and start the review! Keep me posted about when the next chapters come up and I'll review those as well! Also I hope my points helped you, if not tell me how I can improve my reviewing skills! Stay blessed!