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Wed Jul 13, 2016 9:46 am
Lightsong says...



I still am desperate for your review. :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Fri Oct 14, 2016 6:01 am
yakitsa says...



Hello hello hello,
this is my first published work on the website - not afraid to say
I'd really appreciate some feedback!
Thanks.
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