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Thu Jan 28, 2016 4:41 am
FlamingPhoenix says...



Hi everyone, I am Jessiebear and I would like to review some of your works. :D

I will review: short stories and novels. Note I am better at reviewing novels. Novels I will not review once off chapters, once you ask me I will review all your chapters unless told not to and please tag me when new chapters are posted.
I will not review: scripts, articles, essays or poetry. Note I will read poetry, but I won't review it. I will maybe comment on it.
I really like and will read: fantasy, action\adventure, dramatic, humour,
I won't read: horror, spiritual, supernatural. Fan fiction please tell me what it is based on and I will get back to you.
I won't read: 14, 16,18 M,L,V
Please no gay stories or stories with demons.

I will give an over all in-depth review and will try to point out small grammar mistakes.

I look forward to reading all your work. :D :D
FlamingPhoenix The Art Freak!
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Thu Jan 28, 2016 12:54 pm
Lightsong says...



Please review To Be a Better Person! Thanks! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Fri Jan 29, 2016 12:58 am
FlamingPhoenix says...



Shore.
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Sat Jan 30, 2016 12:29 am
margaretmcf says...



Hey, so I haven't written the whole thing yet, but I'm having a really hard time writing it, so I was wondering if you could take a look at it and tell me what you think? Also I'm sorry if I totally misread the reviews thing I'm super new here.
  





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Sat Jan 30, 2016 4:17 am
FlamingPhoenix says...



Thant is okay. But what am I spots to look at? :?:
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Sat Jan 30, 2016 9:30 am
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writerkitty says...



Hello there jessiebear!
I'd really like it if you can review my novel 'The Myth'. You reviewed the first chapters for me and it was really helpful. But can you please review the other chapters too?
(Not all of them! any chapter you prefer. :) )

Thanks!

Just keep writing, writing, WRITING! :D
  





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Sat Jan 30, 2016 10:02 am
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FlamingPhoenix says...



Okay I will be delighted t do it for you my grate friend I will do it to morrow.
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Sat Jan 30, 2016 10:09 am
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writerkitty says...



Thank you very much jessiebear. You're a good friend! :D

Just keep writing, writing, WRITING! :D
  








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