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Hi Lizzie, it's Meerkat. Would you please review my short story? I would really be grateful for some good constructive criticism.
When the Dust Settles

I don't know the exact word count, but it's pretty short. It is technically Dramatic, but I only chose that genre because I didn't know what else to call it. Rating is appropriate for all, but some minor tobacco use. As for deadline, anytime you can would be great, so no rush.

If I've done anything wrong, please let me know. Thank you for your time!

Also: Is there a specific story of your you'd like reviewed in payment, or simply any one of your list? Thanks!

Alright Meerkat. Sorry it took so long to respond. I would prefer a review on TARDIS Chapter 2 but it does not really matter. I will try and get my review done by Monday.

I just finished the review. It is a bit short but you already had a couple of really good reviews. I did not want to overlap the ideas too much.

I'm still here and ready to do reviews.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Pernicus/Star-Shade-Chapter-1-Oblivion-On-The-Horizon-127732

Here is my first chapter. Thanks for doing this.

Review is done. I will review the next chapter to, if you like.
Thanks for the one on my poem.
-lizzy

General description: Being adopted into a wealthy, white, military family would be anyone’s dream, the money and privilege behind it. However, Sirrah Winters does not see it that way with the constant whispers, stares, and jokes; Sirrah begins to feel as though it was a huge mistake that the Winters’ family had adopted her, when she was only five years old. Since then, Sirrah has always known that she is different than they are with her charcoal skin tone.

16 years old

word count: 7922

Deadline....each chapter at the end of the week.

Links: 1. Strangers

2. Family Too

3. Slightly

4. Friendship Depletion

5. Not Permitted

6. Tall Tales

7. Thoughts

-There are a lot more chapters, but I am doing them one by one...I am sure we all do. So, when chapter 8 is ready, I will post in here as well, if that's ok.

Hey there, could you please review a couple of my novel's chapters for me?

Its rating is 12+

It's a sci-fi/fantasy & adventure

So far the word count is only 3326 words.

Here are the links:

Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part I)

Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part II)

Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part III)

Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part I)

Deadline: One chapter by the end of each week? If that's not too much to ask.

Thanks in advance! And feel free to ask me to review one of your works.

Hi! Can you review my novel, Death's Reign

It takes place in Victorian England where a young woman by the name of Emmeline Briar lives locked up in an asylum all thanks to her uncle, the last family member she has.

It's a mystery fantasy and in the later chapter that I have not written yet it will have violence. I don't think it's 16+ though so it's safe. Here are the links to the chapters out now but can I tag you when I post another one?

word count- 817
Death's Reign: Chapter I

word count- 927
Death's Reign: Chapter II

word count- 1098
Death's Reign: Chapter III

word count- 890
Death's Reign: Chapter IV

word count- 1205
Death's Reign: Chapter V

word count- 1259
Death's Reign: Chapter VI

total word count- 6196


Thanks

@Soulfulwriter
I've started reviewing your novel and I'm a couple chapters in.

@yizhongt
I am currently reviewing another novel but I'll try and review the first chapter by Saturday.

@Soulfulwriter
I probably won't be doing any reviews for the next two weeks. If you could go ahead and attach the rest of the links to your post, that would be great.

@yizhongt
I've decided to stop reviewing your old chapters because I've updated my terms. I don't want to review novels that already have a lot of good reviews. I'll get to the newer chapters. I'm just skipping two reviews but I have the read the story so far.

@AliceAfternoon
The message stays the same as the other posts.

5. Not Permitted

6. Tall Tales

7. Thoughts

8. Not Ready

9. Truth

10. Defense and Old Friendships

11. Outrage

Thats all of them until I can get more points to post the rest.

b0ss? Could you review this kansur?

Miss Fortune

Title: Miss Fortune
Word Count: 298
Genre: Romance, Flash Fiction

Would you kindly? ^-^

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gkg ... ImOb4/edit
(Short story)

Hi, @ElizabethLovelace! I saw you were looking for stuff to review, and saw that some of the genres you wanted to read happen to be the genres for the book I'm currently writing. I don't need the glossary reviewed; I just included the link because it's helped a lot of readers understand the story.

The Automaton's Heart: Glossary

The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 1

The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 2

The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 3

I also saw that you would prefer to do chapters with less reviews, so if you feel that's the case, I'm fine with you just reviewing the ones you feel need it the most.

Thank you in advance if you choose to review my book.