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Gender: Female
Points: 1335
Reviews: 277
Sat Jan 02, 2016 9:02 pm
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Charm says...



I have a lot of free time lately and I'm willing to review your work!

WARNING
If you are lazy and don't read everything I've written below before requesting I will know and I will not review your work :evil:
(Sorry for being so intense I just can't stand it when people expect me to give them good reviews when they won't even properly approach me!)

If you want me to review your work please follow the instructions below!

Things you are required to tell me:
-Genre
-Rating (ex. R rated or 12+)
-the link
-Synopsis
-type of work


Things you are not required to tell me but I'd appreciate if you did so:
-length
-due date
-what you want me to look for in your work (ex. Plot, Characters, Pace, Dialogue)


Keep in mind!!!:
-I suck at reviewing poetry and I have no idea what I'm talking about when I'm reviewing poetry. Therefore I recommend not requesting reviews for poetry.
-Everything I say is my opinion and everything I've learned through my experiences. I am young and have only been writing seriously for about 3 years.
-I am honest and sometimes it is not what you want to hear but even so, just because I'm honest does not mean I'm going to be rude or mean.

Things I include in my reviews/how I write my reviews!:
In my reviews I talk about the good and the bad of your work.
Here are the topics that I will talk about:
-Plot
-Pace
-Flow
-Characters
-Character description
-Dialogue
-Character relationships
-Weird sentences and sometimes grammar (if you are looking for a grammar review I am not your gal)
-Confusion
-Interest (I will tell you if your work interested me or not)


I hope you enjoy my reviews! Sorry if I'm being too strict :smt022 <3
Last edited by Charm on Thu Apr 14, 2016 11:23 pm, edited 3 times in total.
  





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Tue Jan 05, 2016 5:05 pm
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EverStorm says...



Hey! I saw on your wall you wanted something to review! I'm more than happy to oblige you :)
Title - Ice Skating, Ice Breaking
-Genre - Short Story, Humor, Romantic.
-Rating (ex. R rated or 12+)- I didn't rate it, but it's completely appropriate.
-Synopsis - It is a continuation of my story "New Years, New Faces" (You don't have to read it to get it though) Overall, Rachel is going to an Ice Skating party and the two new guys show up. She has a crush on Mark, and is forced to talk to him. One thing leads to another... and yeah.
-type of work - Idk what you mean, but Short story, Humor, Romantic (Sorry if that not it 0_0 )
Things you are not required to tell me but I'd appreciate if you did so:
-length - 1352 words.
-due date - Just whenever.
-what you want me to look for in your work (ex. Plot, Characters, Pace, Dialogue) - Anything that's boring, random, unexplained. Just give me the usual :)

Thanks for the help :)
  





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Thu Jan 07, 2016 8:58 pm
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Nommie says...



Ello Mad ^^

Maybe you'd be interested in reviewing this new favorite story of mine?

White Bird
Fantasy/Romance Rated M - Novel Story
(for later chapters) It starts out 12+
Currently at two chapters, total 2k+ each.


A young maiden living at the foot of a mountain, cut off from the world, wishes for the chance to meet another living soul. Her wish is finally granted, but in the form of a badly bruised and beaten wolf. With a nurturing heart, she cares for the creature and brings it back to good health. Only to discover it's hardly the normal animal she believed it to be..

I'd like if you could look more towards the pace and characters.
Something I worry about the most lol

Thank you in advance! :3
  





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Fri Jan 08, 2016 3:05 am
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Meerkat says...



Hi, I'm Meerkat. Would you wind reviewing my short story?
When the Dust Settles
Genre: Dramatic
Rating: Brief tobacco use, otherwise appropriate
Synopsis: Two people stuck outside during a bombing face mortality in different ways.
Length: Inexact, but fairly short
Due date: Whenever you have time
Specifics to look for: Tone/sentence flow, characterization

I hope that's all the information that's necessary. Thank you for your time!
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Tue Jan 12, 2016 2:44 pm
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leslieloo says...



Hi! I'm Leslie and I would like a review for my work.

Genre: Horror

Rating: 12+

Link: The Abduction

Synopsis: As Hailey was being abducted, she found the truth about the person who had kidnapped her.

Type of work: Short story

Due Date: Whenever you are available.

Length: 1114 words
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Points: 491
Reviews: 7
Wed Jan 13, 2016 3:38 pm
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Remy020 says...



Hi I would really love it if you could review my work!

Genre- Fantasy:Action/Adventure

Rating-12+

Secrets Chapter 1

Synopsis: I ran and I didn't stop.The smell of smoke filled the air. The building shook as deafening explosions filled my ears,making them ring. I tripped and fell awkwardly on something, making my right leg flair up in pain. I got up, and limped towards towards the exit,coughing from the smoke and wiping dust from my face. As soon as I made it out of the apartment and into the street I collapsed, the last thing I saw was the glow of the burning building.

Length: About three pages.

Type: Novel/Chapter

Due Date: whenever

What I want you to look for: plot, pace, anything confusing or random, anything you think needs work. :) thanks!
To write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write.
Gertrude Stein.

The most important thing is to enjoy your life - to be happy - it's all that matters.
Audrey Hepburn.

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Mon Feb 01, 2016 9:53 pm
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Sins says...



Heya MadWriter! (what do you like being called? I've never asked you, naughty me)

I was wondering if you'd take a look at the first chapter of my novel for me, it would be much appreciated :)

Genre: YA, realistic fiction

Rating: 12+

The link: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

Length: About 2,500 words (I think)

Due date: Whenever you are able to, there's no rush!

What you want me to look for in your work: Nothing in particular really, just anything that stands out to you.


Please and thank you!
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