Young Writers Society

Hi, I'm Meerkat, a relative newbie here looking to spend some time productively. My options were to write some reviews or shovel two feet of snow, so guess which one I chose?

I'll review short stories, poems, lyrics, scripts, novel chapters, manifestos, threat letters, declarations of war, anything at all, really.

Thanks for reading, and have a lovely winter!

Hello. Would you mind reviewing my short story for me? Born A Harami It is the prequel to another story of mine and, although I think they can pretty much stand on their own, I will provide the link to that story as well. The Beggar Boy (Feel free to review this one too if you want.) Thanks in advance! :3

I'd love it if you could review this, please!

Fanfic- chapter 1

InfiniteRectangles wrote:Hello. Would you mind reviewing my short story for me? Born A Harami It is the prequel to another story of mine and, although I think they can pretty much stand on their own, I will provide the link to that story as well. The Beggar Boy (Feel free to review this one too if you want.) Thanks in advance! :3

Will do!

Dracula wrote:I'd love it if you could review this, please!
Fanfic- chapter 1

Sure! I'm not very experienced reviewing fanfiction, but I'll give it a shot!

I'm ready for more writing, if anyone needs something reviewed!

Hi, I would love if you could review the novel I am writing. It is a loose fanfiction on the Wings of Fire series, but you don't need to have read the books to understand my story. Please can you go through and review all my chapters. I know that the beginning chapter isn't very good and I am working on it. I really need someone to review all the chapters. It would be a great help if you could.

It is a story with dragons as the main characters and the main character is a shadow talon named Zoltar. It is an adventure story with lots of action and journeying to new places.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124445
Let me know if you need all the links. Thank you for your time.

Okay, so felistia:

Chapter 1 of The Search for the Ruby of Fire is complete, and I have just now realized this is going to take me a looooong time. I don't like giving short, shallow reviews, and going over 28 chapters in depth will take months, with my schedule. I'm happy to review your full novel, but it will take a while. Would you mind if I did it four or five chapters at a time, instead? I would read all the information and then give a mega-review on every 4th or 5th part. Let me know if this would work, or you have a different idea.

Thanks for your consideration!

Hello! Would you mind reviewing my story? I need a little help with it. Thank you!
The Abduction

leslieloo wrote:Hello! Would you mind reviewing my story? I need a little help with it. Thank you!
The Abduction

Sure thing!

Hi Meerkat, Felistia here replying to your idea above and I think that is a great idea.

Hi, I'd really like it if you could review what I have written on my novel so far. I'll link the first chapter below, and the other should be on the sidebar.
Near To You, Chapter 1

Done!

Hello! I could really use a review on the first chapter of my novel, The Remarkable Blossoming of Lola - Chapter 1. Thank you ^-^~

Hey I posted chapter one of my first novel, and I edited it recently. Can you please give a review on it?
here's the link,
The Myth- Chapter one; Worst day ever.

Thank you!

Ready for more to review!