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Fri Feb 05, 2016 12:57 am
felistia says...



Hi, could you please review my newest poem. I am Water.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/I-am-Water-127001

Thanks for your time. :D
  





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Fri Feb 05, 2016 12:46 pm
Meerkat says...



Sure thing, felistia. I'm just finishing up a huge school project, so I should be able to review more chapters of Ruby of Fire soon as well. Thank you for your patience! :)
"Sometimes it is better to light a flamethrower than curse the darkness." –Terry Pratchett
  





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Mon Feb 22, 2016 8:23 pm
CodyKnight says...



Knight's Gauntlet

Hey I would appreciate it if you could give my first chapter a read through and let me know what you think :)

Whether or not you get to it, thanks in advance!

(That does not mean their won't be post-thanks) :)
  





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Fri Mar 04, 2016 4:54 am
zsmith says...



Hi there, the first chapter of my novel has plenty of reviews but none of the other chapters do, do you think you could go and give some of them a review?

Numb - Chapter 1
  





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Fri Mar 11, 2016 2:26 am
Meerkat says...



Ready to review more!
"Sometimes it is better to light a flamethrower than curse the darkness." –Terry Pratchett
  





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Fri Mar 11, 2016 4:10 pm
NerdyGirl says...



Could you review my speech for me please and tell me if it's any good? Thanks! It's called Joe's DIner.

Joe's Diner
  





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Sat Mar 12, 2016 10:51 pm
BlueJayWalker10 says...



Hey! I'd like you to review one of my stories--Words Written in Lightning. I currently have four chapters out, and I'd love it if you could read all four! (I'm working really hard on this.)
Thanks!
Links:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 1
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 3
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 4
"Red is the color of fate, right?"
-Zen Wisteria, Snow White with the Red Hair
  





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Sun Mar 20, 2016 7:57 pm
Audy says...



Chapter one please! Chapter 2 only if you want. Thanks!
  





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Sun Mar 20, 2016 8:45 pm
Glauke says...



Hey! I'd really appreciate a review of my new poem, It's raining, but I don't believe that it's raining! Thanks so much :)
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining
  





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Mon Apr 04, 2016 4:25 am
BlackhawkUnder says...



Hi there!

I was hoping you could review my novel chapters for me? I'm looking for reviews on my chapters 3 and 4, but it definitely helps if you read the previous chapters, for background info and such. Here are the links for chapters 3 and 4, prior chapters can also be accessed from there as well:

Chapter 3, The Name Game
Chapter 4.1, The Name Game
Chapter 4.2, The Name Game

I'm also looking for someone to regularly review my chapters as I put them up, so if my story at all interests you and you're willing, I would love for you to do that! If not I totally understand :)

Thanks in advance!
  





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Fri May 06, 2016 2:11 pm
Meerkat says...



Ready for more reviews!
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Fri May 06, 2016 2:14 pm
yizhongt says...



Could you please review:

Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part II)

Thanks in advance!
  





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Wed Jun 08, 2016 4:42 pm
Maricore says...



Could you review my first chapter of my novel.
The Clan Of The Dead.
The clan of the dead_Chapter one: The origins
Thank you!
  








There are those who say that life is like a book, with chapters for each event in your life and a limited number of pages on which you can spend your time. But I prefer to think that a book is like a life, particularly a good one, which is well to worth staying up all night to finish.
— Lemony Snicket