The first book of my novel series Quest for Fire is in the green room and I'd really love some reviews of it. All, but the first chapter have no reviews on them. Could you please read the first chapter before reading the rest please. You don't have to write a review, but it's kind of important to the plot to read the first chapter.
@felistia, I'll certainly try to give you a couple reviews on some chapters. I probably won't be able to follow the whole book though. We'll see. The soonest you'll get a review by me is in three days, so don't get too worried if I don't do it right away! c:
It's an improved version, it's chapter 1 of my story.. I have no reviews xD .. And I really would appreciate any sorta feed back so I can improve some more!
Thank you so much.
If you ever want a review please let me know as I would feel very happy to
Good evening, Holysocks. I wondered if I could request reviews on the first and second chapters of my story? If two chapters are too many then I understand. Thank you.
Hey @AnarchyWolf! Sorry for the late reply. I won't be able to get to your novel until at least two days from now but I'll try to as soon as possible! ^_^
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