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Holysocks says...



I'm quite a slow reader- so slow that it takes me most of the time reading someone's work, rather than actually reviewing it. This is mostly why I don't end up reviewing very often, I think. So here's my thought: if there's anyone brave enough to record themselves reading their works, I'll review them. Or I'll try, at least (this is an experiment). If you want to give it a try, just follow the steps~

1). Record your voice on a site like this one, and include a link of your work on YWS.

2). Preview your recording to make sure that I'm not only going to be hearing static. :smt003

3). Wait patiently for me to review it. :P :P :P


Don't be shy or concerned about it~ I'm probably the worst person at reading out loud (and talking) so I completely understand and won't judge you or anything like that. c: Here's a recording of me for proof: http://vocaroo.com/i/s1ITmKExmYIq I did it rather quick so it's a bit static-y. XP
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Fri Dec 04, 2015 3:00 am
tigeraye says...



sure, this sounds like fun. I know there are already a ton of reviews on this, but this was the only thing I felt comfortable recording ._.

Heartbeat Academy: Chapter One [1/2]
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Fri Dec 04, 2015 10:19 pm
Holysocks says...



@tigeraye, you are awesome! I'm going to try to review that for you the day after tomorrow! c:

EDIT: Done!
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BluesClues says...



I will definitely be doing this at some point, but it's going to be a while because I'm revising.
  





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I'm really looking forward to to when you get around to that, @BlueAfrica! ^_^
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Thu Dec 10, 2015 10:01 pm
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Pretzelstick says...



I'm an auditory leaner as well, so I completely understand. That being said, here ya go:

Test of Freedom

And the recording is here:
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0rZlXn6NGHJ

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Fri Dec 11, 2015 5:29 pm
Holysocks says...



Awesome, @Pretzelstick! I'll get to that in a couple days, hopefully. c:
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Wed Dec 16, 2015 5:40 am
Holysocks says...



That took a bit longer than I expected, but it's done. :-P
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Fri May 06, 2016 1:59 pm
Holysocks says...



Hey folks!

I'll review almost anything: chapters, shorts, poetry, essays, lyrics, chapters in the middle of a novel I haven't read- the whole shebang! But the only thing I'm asking is that your piece is either still in the green room or didn't get as helpful reviews perhaps (not that mine will be much better :P but we try). Just until there isn't such a full GR.

So you think you can handle my reviews? ;)

Step 1

Post a link to your work below.

Step 2

Be patient- I am but a mortal, and sometimes I'm late for things and procrastinate. Which is why you should definitely put your request in sooner then later! XP

Step 3

If I've reviewed your work, please acknowledge that! It would be kind of lame if you asked for a review and then didn't say anything when I reviewed it. And I'm always open to questions and such. c:

I reserve the right to close this thread at anytime. O.O
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yizhongt says...



Could you please review:

Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part II)

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Fri May 06, 2016 4:14 pm
Holysocks says...



The deed is done!
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AnarchyWolf says...



Hey Holysocks. May I request a review on this first chapter of something I may or may not continue on grounds that it, as of yet, has no reviews?

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Sujana says...



Hey there Holy! Could you review the prologue of my new book for me? Thanks!

Kolfer--Prologue
"For with much wisdom comes much sorrow; the more knowledge, the more grief."

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Mon May 09, 2016 5:55 pm
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Done and done!
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jumpingsheep says...



Hi Holysocks! Could you possibly review these first few project chapters?

The Chaos Game, Chapters 1-3

Thanks!
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