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Deanie's Reviewing Business II



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Thu Nov 26, 2015 11:52 am
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Deanie says...



I had a Reviewing Business in 2013 and no one has requested anything since 2014! I really want to get back into reviewing, so request away and I will try to get to everyone's requests at least throughout the weekend of when requested. But do give me some time.

WILL ACCEPT:

I will review novel chapters. It doesn't matter which number the chapter is, but if you are going to request mid-novel, please include a little plot summary so I at least know what is going on in the novel!

Happy to review poetry and essays as well.

I don't care about age restrictions and so on either.

WON'T ACCEPT:

Fanfiction. Sorry >.< I generally end up disliking it.

NOT SURE IF I WILL ACCEPT IT?

Just ask! I don't bite ;)

Thank you <3 Now request away!
Trust in God and all else follows.

Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014
Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015
Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015
  





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Thu Nov 26, 2015 12:45 pm
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Lightsong says...



Please review this subchapter, work/Lightsong/Bad-Lights-Good-Lights-Chapter-42-1244249! The plot is simple, really, in which selected teenagers become light companions and fight against the bad lights. :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Thu Nov 26, 2015 4:23 pm
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BellaRoma says...



Just reminding you of Hole in the Head - 2/3
Maybe see you there on review day?
You cannot train yourself to notice,
To feel pain, and swallow fear
  





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Mon Nov 30, 2015 7:28 pm
Deanie says...



@BellaRoma, you're done!
Trust in God and all else follows.

Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014
Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015
Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015
  





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Tue Dec 01, 2015 6:52 am
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Deanie says...



@Lightsong I've also reviewed your chapter too!

*waits on more works to review*
Trust in God and all else follows.

Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014
Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015
Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015
  





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Wed Dec 02, 2015 8:48 pm
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felistia says...



Hi, I would love if you could have a look at my poetry piece called The Sands of Time.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/The-Sands-of-Time-125340
:D :D
  





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Wed Dec 16, 2015 1:43 am
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Lightsong says...



Please review School Kids! Thanks! :)
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Mon Dec 21, 2015 8:04 am
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InfiniteRectangles says...



Please review my poem. It's a short and silly thing so I'm sure it won't take very long and you might even laugh! ^-^ She Blew Me Away
Enjoy!
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Thu Dec 31, 2015 7:14 am
Deanie says...



@felistia, I have reviewed your poem!
Trust in God and all else follows.

Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014
Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015
Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015
  





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Thu Dec 31, 2015 1:10 pm
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Lightsong says...



I want to change my poem to ​The Beauty of Educational Prison! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Thu Dec 31, 2015 6:01 pm
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MissGangamash says...



Hi, I'd really love a review on my extract of a novel I'm writing. It's completely different to everything I've done so I would really appreciate some feedback. Here's the link: Bad Seed (extract)

I'm also uploading a novel on here which reviews are really welcome but it is rather long and so if you don't have the time to go through it, I understand. Here's the link anyway if you fancy a read :) : The Progeny (Prologue)

Thank you and hope you enjoy!
  





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Fri Jan 08, 2016 6:56 am
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BellaRoma says...



Can you please take a look at Garcia and Gracie A - 1/2
Here's the link, as promised. Thanks - I know you don't always like fanfiction...
You cannot train yourself to notice,
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Tue Jan 12, 2016 5:13 am
SereneSimpliciT says...



DUET :Chapter 6: This is the next chapter of DUET after your previous review.
10 to go XDD
You be you, and I'll be me
  





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Mon Jan 25, 2016 5:05 am
Deanie says...



@BlackhawkUnder, I've finally read through and reviewed all your chapters!

To the others: I know I am behind but I WILL get to all of these <3
Trust in God and all else follows.

Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014
Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015
Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015
  








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