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Deanie's Reviewing Business II



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Wed Mar 23, 2016 2:40 pm
KaiTheGreater says...



Could you please take a look at my two latest poems, Untitled and You and Me and Infinity? Title suggestions for the second (yup, Y&M&I, got it ;) ) would be appreciated. That one's a little more rough overall, but for Untitled I'm mostly looking for input on the style.
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Wed Mar 23, 2016 10:33 pm
eldEr says...



*coughs*

oy. I would so much appreciate your thoughts on this.
Heartlines - Prologue

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Fri Mar 25, 2016 2:40 pm
RubyRed says...



It would be so very nice if you'd review this for me: The Heart of a Warrior ch. 1 Thanks! :D
You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote

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Fri Mar 25, 2016 4:33 pm
Deanie says...



Tomorrow morning shall be reviewing morning! I am going to get to these :3
Trust in God and all else follows.

Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014
Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015
Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015
  








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