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Come on. I don't bite.

A review of this and chapter one of my new romance novel? Please
Ohana Means Family~ Chapter Two

Hi @Rascalover. I will get to it as soon as I can. Could you please tell me which new romance novel it is that you want me to review, so just to make sure that I review the right piece.

felistia wrote:Hi @Rascalover. I will get to it as soon as I can. Could you please tell me which new romance novel it is that you want me to review, so just to make sure that I review the right piece.

Ohana Means Family. The first two chapters have been posted in the romance section. Thanks!!

Rascalover done reviewing your work.

As for the rest of you review seekers out there, I am open.

And still waiting. Come on. I need to get at least one review done a day and it might as well be one someone asked for.

Hey! I'm Jay Walker. I'm really unsure as to how good all my works are, though I already have a couple reviews on my works. I love to as many opinions as possible. (I really value other people's opinions.)
If possible, I'd like for you to all four chapters of Words Written in Lighting, but it's okay if you only do the first chapter.
Words Written in Lightning is a Action/Adventure Fantasy Novel.
The first chapter is here:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 1
Second chapter:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2
Third chapter:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 3
Fourth chapter:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 4
Thanks!

@BlueJayWalker10 I will get to it right away.

Please review my novel Redemption? Thanks in advance.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=127592#comments

Hey, the first chapter of my novel has plenty of reviews but none of the other chapters do, do you think you could go and give some of them a review?
Numb - Chapter 1

Hi @zsmith I am really sorry, but I can't review your story as it is rated 16 and I don't like reading anything rated above 12. Sorry again.

I'm ready for more reviews. With review day almost here, I should be able to get a whole lot done.

A Night Before the Exam...

Thanks!

Could you please review:

Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part II)

Thanks in advance!

@DrFeelGood and @yizhongt I will review you as soon as I can.