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Tue Dec 22, 2015 11:47 pm
felistia says...



Sure I will get around to it as soon as I can. :D
  





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Wed Dec 23, 2015 1:08 am
felistia says...



@InfiniteRectangles I have finished reviewing your story and I am ready for the next lot of reviews. Bring it on. :D
  





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Wed Dec 23, 2015 5:31 am
InfiniteRectangles says...



Hey! Sorry if I'm being annoying,but would you mind reviewing my poem Those Three Words for me? Thanks! ^-^
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Wed Dec 23, 2015 5:58 am
fukase says...



For the upcoming parody of review day. I'd love seeing your reviews on my two works:
kaiyō, sora no asai
The Drenched Field
Both of them are poetry. So add some fortissimo, but look out for any crescendo. You don't want to make it awkward.
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)
  





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Wed Dec 23, 2015 6:39 am
felistia says...



I will get around to them as soon as I can. :D
  





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Tue Dec 29, 2015 2:38 am
felistia says...



@NicolMemo and @InfiniteRectangles I have finished reviewing your work and I am ready for the next lot of reviews. :D
  





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Fri Jan 01, 2016 2:22 pm
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fukase says...



Thank you, sweetie. My internet was down, so an apologize for the late thank you. I might check your story sometimes~
Spoiler! :
But I got some boarding school to start... WHY NOW... I just got my internet working...
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)
  





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Sat Jan 16, 2016 12:20 pm
felistia says...



Up and ready for more review requests. :D
  





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Sun Jan 17, 2016 6:54 am
EternalRain says...



Hey! I could use a review on the first chapter of my novel - The Remarkable Blossoming of Lola - Chapter 1 . Thank you so much! :) It's a realistic/drama story! ^-^
“Fate is like a strange, unpopular restaurant filled with odd little waiters who bring you things you never asked for and don't always like.”

-- Lemony Snicket


Check out Squills!

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Mon Jan 18, 2016 1:20 pm
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felistia says...



@EternalRain I have finished reviewing your chapter and will be sure to keep following your story.
As for all you folks I am ready for the next lot of review requests. Fire away. :D
  





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Mon Jan 25, 2016 12:13 pm
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Bumping thread and still waiting for review requests. :D
  





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Tue Jan 26, 2016 2:27 am
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Charm says...



I wrote a poem. It's the first one I've written in a long time and I don't think it's that good. I would love to here what you think and I'd love to be given some advice: "I Would Kill Myself"
  





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Tue Jan 26, 2016 6:11 am
felistia says...



Hi @MadWriter7, I had a look at your poem and I am afraid it is marked M. As stated on the first page of this thread I will not read M rated works, so I am really sorry, but I can't read this work.
  





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Tue Jan 26, 2016 1:26 pm
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I'm sorry. I understand.
  





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Sat Jan 30, 2016 4:51 am
felistia says...



Come on everyone!!!!! Hit me with a whole lot of reviews for review day or just in general. :D
  








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