Young Writers Society

Hi everyone, Felistia here and I would like to review some of your works.

I will review: I will only review Novels. I will not review once off chapters, once you ask me I will review all your chapters unless told not to. I won't start in the middle of a novel. I will start from the beginning and give you a review on each chapter. I will point out spelling mistakes, help with plot points and characters and give an over all in depth review. If I don't get back to you with in three day's feel free to nag me.

I really like fantasy, action\adventure, dramatic, suspense, humor. Fan fiction just tell my what it's a fan fiction and I get back to you. The answer will most likely be yes.

I will not review: scripts, articles, essays, short stories or poems.

I won't read: horror, spiritual, supernatural.

I won't read: 14, 16,18 M,L,V

The only thing I ask in return is that you could have a look at my story. https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=159&t=105384

Here's a summary about it.

The Quest for Fire series ~ Book one Into the Mists

Summary for the Quest for Fire series. This is the story of a dragon named Zoltar who's tribe is on the brink of extinction. Their only hope is the Ruby of Fire. Can Zoltar cross the continent of Megalonia to find this mysterious jewel or will he perish along the way?

There is no ratings for this story and is for everyone. It is a fantasy\action\adventure story. If you like the Wings of Fire by TUI T. SUTHERLAND, I think you'll enjoy this book.

I look forward to reading all your work. Let the requests roll in.

Hi felistia! I'm Mage. You reviewed The Giving Curse earlier, so I was wondering if you would like to review more of my stories.
This one is also a fantasy novel, with the added twist of mysteries. Said mysteries aren't all that dramatic as of now, but I plan on having murders in future books.
Here's the link!
The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire: Chapter 1

I have reviewed it and am ready for the next request.

Come on bring on the requests!!!

Please review I Am! Thanks!

I'm on it.

done.
Ready for the next review.

Hello, this is Kman134 and i was wondering if any of you would like to review my story, My Life in a Bizarre Town?

Sure, I'll have a look.

I am really sorry but this work is supernatural and is rated 16. I can't read this work. I am terribly sorry, please read my post at the top of the wall I will tell you what I can and can't read.

please review this chapter, there is a romantic scene that i cant get right could use some input.

Can you please leave the link? I will get round to it as soon as possible.

alright thanks. link added

The link doesn't seem to be working. What is the name of you chapter? I will go and have a look for it in your folder.

chapter 12

just chapter 12 the others have already been re written. sorry my chat window wont work