Hi! You've already reviewed my first chapter, but right after you reviewed it I had an epiphany. I decided to fix my first chapter, add a scene, remove all flashbacks from chapter 1 and write a prologue. I would love it if you could re-review chapter 1 and review my prologue. Thank you so much and your previous review did not go to waste because you helped me figure lots of stuff out when I was fixing my first chapter. New Haven: Prologue
Ah, hello. I saw you mentioned you would keep up with novels... As you've already reviewed Chapter 1.1 of this novel, would it be any trouble to request a review on In the Absence of Stars - 1.2?
Hi! I am new to YWS and have just posted my first poem on this site. I would be infinitely grateful for a review, if you don't mind! Here's the link--> I'm Only 18 Thank you!! :3
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
Hey there! I would really appreciate it if you could review my satire for me! The Creativity Epidemic It is the first satire I have written and I could use some feedback! Thanks! :3
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
"Do not try to be pretty. You weren't meant to be pretty; you were meant to burn down the earth and graffiti the sky. Don't let anyone ever simplify you to just 'pretty'" — Suzanne Rivard
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