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Fri Mar 31, 2017 1:08 am
Featherstone says...



I'm working on two novels, and would love it if you could check one of them out and leave a few reviews. I'll go ahead and tell you a bit about both so you can decide which one you're more interested in ^_^

The first one is called Huntress. It's fantasy and action/adventure about a girl who is raised by werewolves but soon finds herself as a werewolf hunter. There's a lot of action, a little bit of romance (including some LGBT+ if you're interested in that kind of thing), and plenty of character development.

Here is the link to the first chapter: Huntress: Chapter 1- Pack [Edited; LMS]

The second is pretty dark, so if you aren't okay with violence, darkness, and evil, don't read it. It is about a fallen angel- one of the most powerful shadow mages that has ever been as well as the Seer (she can see through all lies/illusions as well as realities, parallel universes, and time)- who has been captured by the Lightwings, the angels. As they say, fight fire with fire, and when the demons attack once more that is exactly what the angels do. They release Raven (the MC) to use her against her kin. Over the course of the story, she finds herself questioning her loyalties, her morals, and the truths of the world.

Here is the first chapter of that:

Shadowsong: Chapter 1.1
Shadowsong: Chapter 1.2

Hope to see you around,

Fea
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Mon Apr 17, 2017 2:16 am
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Could you review profile/Feltrix/portfolio? That would be great. You don't have to review the original version, but if you felt like it, it couldn't hurt.
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