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Mon Nov 02, 2015 2:20 am
kingofeli says...



Are you planning on posting your novel here on YWS? Want someone to pledge to review every chapter, as long as they're able? Well, look no further!

I'm looking for someone's novel I can review from the beginning to the end, preferably something that's still in-progress. I'll try to use all of the analytical techniques I've learned in my language arts classes to analyze it, which will help me and you to improve our skills!

I require no payment for this other than a simple "thank you."

Please post below if you want me to review!
Feel free to just randomly message me, I get bored easily.

I'm a black, non-binary transgender boy, who is a Christian witch (tentative for now). I'm also a panromantic asexual. I sell poetry; contact me if you're interested in buying poems from me.
  





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Wed Nov 04, 2015 9:10 am
felistia says...



Hi kingofeli, I am Felistia and I would love if you could review the novel I am writing. It is called the Search for the Ruby of Fire. I have left a short description on what it is about if you like.
Spoiler! :
The story is about a shadow talon dragon called Zoltar and he is on a mission to save his tribe from extinction.

Here is the link https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Prologue-124445
  





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Thu Mar 10, 2016 5:31 am
Pernicus says...



Here's the link to my sci-fi epic novel's first chapter. It's all I've posted from it for now but if it garners enough interest then I'll post the rest of the chapters over time.


Star Shade, Chapter 1: Oblivion On The Horizon
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Sun Mar 20, 2016 8:01 pm
Audy says...



Kingofeli, thanks so much! Whenever you get that chanceChapters 1&2
  





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Mon Apr 04, 2016 4:27 am
BlackhawkUnder says...



Hi there!

I was hoping you could review my novel chapters for me? I'm looking for reviews on my chapters 3 and 4, but it definitely helps if you read the previous chapters, for background info and such. Here are the links for chapters 3 and 4, prior chapters can also be accessed from there as well:

Chapter 3, The Name Game
Chapter 4.1, The Name Game
Chapter 4.2, The Name Game

I'm also looking for someone to regularly review my chapters as I put them up, so if my story at all interests you and you're willing, I would love for you to do that! If not I totally understand :)

Thanks in advance!
  





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Thu Apr 07, 2016 1:43 am
yizhongt says...



Hey there, could you please review

Starlight: Prologue

Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part I)

Thanks in advance !
  





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Fri Apr 15, 2016 5:07 pm
Sujana says...



Hello! I see you've opened a review thread for novels. You can come to this one anytime you like, I'm patient enough, but I thought you'd be interested in reading the whole of my book Divine Intervention (or the first part if that's all you're willing to read).

Divine Intervention, Chapter One
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Ecclesiastes 1: 18
  





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Mon Apr 18, 2016 6:55 am
Desdemona says...



Hallo :)

I've got two novels going, one which I've only just started, and I need reviews on them ;-;
Could you be so kind as to give them a look? :)

This is Suspect 009: It's got 5 chapters out
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/BlackCatXx/Suspect-009-Chapter-1-122715

This is The Boy and the Dahlia, I just started it.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/BlackCatXx/The-Boy-and-the-Dahlia-128636
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August 1, 2015 - April 21, 2016: BlackCatXx
April 21, 2016 -- Desdemona
  





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Thu Apr 28, 2016 2:18 am
Rascalover says...



Willing to review the first five chapters of my romantic novel chicago??
Chicago
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html
  





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Sun Sep 11, 2016 1:08 pm
TheOneNamedZoe says...



if you're still doing this i would love if you could review my series thus far.
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Wed Sep 14, 2016 7:29 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I have a new Novel that I am working on that I could use reviews for. Please let me know what you think.

The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Prologue
  





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Thu Oct 06, 2016 1:56 pm
Charm says...



Hey! Can you review and follow my novel Atana? It's a sci-fi mystery novel. So far I have three chapters on YWS, but I'm writing the fourth now.

Atana: Chapter 1 (1316 words)
Atana: Chapter 2 (841 words)
Atana: Chapter 3 (1501 words)

Thanks <3
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Thu Oct 20, 2016 11:55 pm
Junel says...



Could you review my first chapter
The Child House Prolouge
  





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Sat Nov 05, 2016 8:42 pm
kingofeli says...



@felistia your link doesn't work!
Feel free to just randomly message me, I get bored easily.

I'm a black, non-binary transgender boy, who is a Christian witch (tentative for now). I'm also a panromantic asexual. I sell poetry; contact me if you're interested in buying poems from me.
  





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Mon Jan 09, 2017 10:57 pm
inktopus says...



I'm currently working on a novel titled Scolopendra that I would like reviews on. I only have 2 chapters posted right now, but the plan is to post a chapter every time I feel I've hit a milestone in word count.
Here's the link: Scolopendra
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