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Laurentine Reviews: Let's Start Right Away



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Sun Nov 01, 2015 10:02 am
lawrence says...



I think I have all the time and opinions to help you out with your craft.

I would review:
Short Stories
Poems
Essays
Novels (I would highly recommend you to send me the first part/chapter of your novel)

I can't guarantee and number of words but I could ensure you with helpful critiques
  





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Sat Jan 30, 2016 4:46 am
felistia says...



Hi Laurentine, Felistia here. :D
It would really be helpful if you could review my novel Search for the Ruby of Fire. It is a fantasy, action\adventure and a fanfiction. The characters in the story are dragons.
Here is the link https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-edited-124445
Thanks for your time and have a nice day. :D
  








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