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Sat Jul 02, 2016 12:28 pm
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hunith says...



hi, would love a review from you. i personally think you're going to love this work. pls check it out:

look into my eyes
  





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Sun Aug 21, 2016 9:26 am
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bloomcadbury says...



Hello.
Would you try reviewing my poems? Your opinion would be a great help.

profile/bloomcadbury/portfolio/461179
  





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Mon Sep 12, 2016 2:28 pm
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MeherazulAzim16 says...



Hi! :shock:

You sound like just the person I was looking for!

Would really help if you take a moment to review my free verse poetry! It 'Gloom', just published it. Oh maybe you can check out an old poetry of mine too which was published a year ago. So, I'll be waiting!

Oh by the way, in one of your lines you wrote 'don't forced yourself into changes', yeah a little spelling/grammartical mistake. Check that out. Why do I care? Come on, what are friends for! :)

Best regards,
Me. :D
So it goes.
  





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Thu Sep 15, 2016 11:19 am
fukase says...



Okay!
Everything is almost done. By tonight almost all of the requests should be finished, I hope.
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)
  





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Wed May 09, 2018 7:23 am
fukase says...



Bumping threads,
If anyone wants me to read your works and review it, I would love to. Just mention it here.
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)
  





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Wed Aug 15, 2018 3:42 am
Aranya says...



Kiss-of-Sunshine-141651
Could you plz review my poem?
  





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Wed Aug 15, 2018 8:06 am
Liminality says...



Hi! Thank you so much for doing this. I'd really love it if you reviewed this poem of mine: Country of a Cruel Soul

Thanks again!
  





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Fri Dec 14, 2018 7:50 pm
Aranya says...



Hi Fukase!!

Could you pls review this slam poem on Gay Love ?? :)
Honey and Sunshine

Shall always be ready to help you in any form!!

Thank you so much!!
  





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Sat Dec 22, 2018 6:02 am
Aranya says...



Hi Fukase

Could you pls review my slam poem on gay love?

Honey and Sunshine

Pls help me it's for a competition.

Thank you so much
  





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Thu May 02, 2019 2:34 pm
Leviari says...



hello!
here's my poem: maybe I am not unhappy

I'm eager for any kind of feedback. Thank you :)
  








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