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Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:35 pm
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fukase says...



Hello.

I'll review poems.

(I can review short stories or novel chapters, but I can't promise to review them.)

Just share a link to your poem, and I'll promise, I will review it.

REMINDER: Don't expect your works to be reviewed right away after you made your requests because I am not here so often. I will require some time like three weeks at most, but if I'm here, I'll review them right away. If you want to know how I review, try to read my latest reviews. (and I really mean reviewS.)
~memo
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I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)
  





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Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:58 pm
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Snazzy says...



Hiya! :D :D

So yes, this is a short story - but kind of not. I wasn't going to put it into "poetry", but then again, it's not really a "short story" either - even though I just stuffed it into that category. :)

The Memory Files: Jackson Onest's - Imaginary Friend

It's kind of an excerpt from something...I don't know. You don't have to review it, but if you're desperate if you want to, you're welcome to it.
"Bretheren, I count not myself to have apprehended: but this one thing I do, forgetting those things which are behind, and reaching forth unto those things which are before,"
~Philippians 3:13

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Thu Oct 29, 2015 3:24 pm
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Done. @SnazzyPencil
I like it. I must thank you for this.
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)
  





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Tue Nov 03, 2015 3:56 am
PancakeandWaffle says...



Aww, poor NicolMemo is in need of some reviewage. Fear not as I shall give you another offering. Well I'm going to bend the rules a little and ask you to review a story of mine cause I'm just a rebel like that. It's called "More Than What It Seems" I would link it but I am not a very skilled person with technology, woe is me! Silliness aside, it and the second part are up so if you still need to fulfill a review urge, it's there for you if you're interested. That's all...bye! :)
Pancake~
  





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Wed Nov 04, 2015 11:10 am
felistia says...



Hi NicolMeno, I am Felistia and I would love if you could review one of my poems. It is called the Ship and the Storm. I will leave a link at the bottom. :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/The-Ship-and-the-Storm-124461
  





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Sat Nov 07, 2015 4:47 am
fukase says...



Sorry for the lateness.
@felistia
Done!

@PancakeandWaffle I
I'm sorry. I couldn't review on yours yet.
Spoiler! :
Obviously, you're breaking rules and I actually didn't have to say sorry to you....Kidding!

However, I'll make a miracle in a day or week, so please keep expecting!

~Memo
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)
  





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Tue Nov 10, 2015 10:34 pm
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PancakeandWaffle says...



Lol fine don't say sorry, I'll just have to pull on through these tough times with Waffle at my side *dramatic pose with Waffle*. It's fine though, plus you're right that I'm breaking the rules, you don't have to if it pains you so. If you want to though, take your time it's all good! Anyway, have a scrumptious day!
  





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Mon Dec 14, 2015 7:09 am
fukase says...



@PancakeandWaffle
Done~! I shall read the next chapters. :D

ANYWAY! I will accept anything now. Novel chapters or short stories or poems, throw them to me~!
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)
  





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Wed Dec 23, 2015 5:15 am
InfiniteRectangles says...



Hi! If you don't mind, could you please review my poem Those Three Words for me? Thanks! ^-^
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
  





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Sat Jan 02, 2016 6:01 am
felistia says...



Hi NicolMemo, Felistia here, again. :D

I would love if you could review my most resent poem. Shadow Behind the Closet. It is a horror and supernatural poem, so if you don't read that sort of stuff that's okay with me. :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/The-Shadow-Behind-the-Closet-126113
  





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Sat Jan 02, 2016 6:35 am
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Hey. Would you mind reviewing anything in this folder? Its okay if you don't, but I figured I'd ask :D

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/profile/nykolasandrews/portfolio
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Fri Feb 12, 2016 7:40 am
fukase says...



Bumping thread~

P/s: If there are any requests, I would do them only when I'm on holiday which is exactly three weeks from now. Feel free to request more than 3 if you afford to wait.
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)
  





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Tue Feb 16, 2016 9:48 pm
Meerkat says...



Hello! I was wondering if you would review my poem Mon Dernier Amour. Thank you in advance!
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Mon Feb 22, 2016 11:10 pm
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https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/EmmVeePi/I-Told-Her-I-Loved-Her-on-the-Fourth-of-July-127380 I would greatly appreciate a review of my poem "I Told Her I Loved Her on the Fourth of July. It is a romantic poem of sorts, but deadly serious. I hope you've got the time. Thanks in advance.
  





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Sun Feb 28, 2016 7:51 am
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felistia says...



Hi NicolMemo, Felistia here, again. :D

I would love if you could review my most resent poem. Freedom. It is a mostly description based poem. Thanks for your time. :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Freedom-127460
  








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