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Mon Oct 19, 2015 10:24 pm
tigeraye says...



I'll review your writing in 48 hours or less, guaranteed. (I have no life.) The only rule is for specific novel chapters, give me more time as I'd like to read the earlier parts of the novel first in order to get a bigger picture of what I'm looking at.
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Tue Oct 20, 2015 10:37 pm
yizhongt says...



Hey there, could you please review:

profile/yizhongt/portfolio/467031

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Tue Oct 20, 2015 11:39 pm
tigeraye says...



yizhongt wrote:Hey there, could you please review:

profile/yizhongt/portfolio/467031

Thanks in advance!


hm, alright. I'll start reviewing your chapters tomorrow, think I did one already.
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Wed Oct 28, 2015 4:53 am
DiskElemental says...



Hey,

I'm trying to figure out if this excerpt works as an opening to a novel. I'd ideally like to know what you know about the characters/setting after reading the segment, and whether or not you'd keep reading.

thanks,
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Mon Jan 30, 2017 7:11 pm
tigeraye says...



reviving this
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