Young Writers Society

Hey guys

I'm trying to get more reviews under my belt, so I'd appreciate you submitting any pieces of yours (new or old) to have reviewed!

I prefer to review short stories and novel chapters of any genre, but feel free to submit anything else, I'm not afraid to give things a try

Hey there, could you please review:

Untitled Fantasy Story: The Chalice of Life: Prologue

Thanks in advance. If you want to review the other subsequent chapters, feel free to do so.

Hi Warnah, Felistia here.
I would love it if you could review the novel I am writing. It is called the Search for the Ruby of Fire and is a fantasy and action novel.
I would advise reading the prologue, but you don't have to review it. I have had a lot of feed back for it already and don't really need another review on it. I really need review on the other chapters though.
Here is the link for the prologue and the first chapter. Please review, it would be a great help.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Prologue-124445
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124490

Can you please review my novel.
Here's the link to the first chapter:
New Haven: Chapter 1: The Train of Memories