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Tue Oct 06, 2015 7:58 pm
Warnah says...



Hey guys :D

I'm trying to get more reviews under my belt, so I'd appreciate you submitting any pieces of yours (new or old) to have reviewed!

I prefer to review short stories and novel chapters of any genre, but feel free to submit anything else, I'm not afraid to give things a try :)
Last edited by Warnah on Fri Oct 09, 2015 8:03 pm, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Thu Oct 08, 2015 12:34 am
yizhongt says...



Hey there, could you please review:

Untitled Fantasy Story: The Chalice of Life: Prologue

Thanks in advance. If you want to review the other subsequent chapters, feel free to do so.
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2015 11:10 am
felistia says...



Hi Warnah, Felistia here.
I would love it if you could review the novel I am writing. It is called the Search for the Ruby of Fire and is a fantasy and action novel. :D :D :D :D
I would advise reading the prologue, but you don't have to review it. I have had a lot of feed back for it already and don't really need another review on it. I really need review on the other chapters though.
Here is the link for the prologue and the first chapter. Please review, it would be a great help. :D :D :D

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Prologue-124445
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124490
  





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Fri Dec 11, 2015 8:50 pm
Charm says...



Can you please review my novel.
Here's the link to the first chapter:
New Haven: Chapter 1: The Train of Memories
  








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